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Array ( [sid] => 11092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unsettled [time] => 2003-01-24 01:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => not feeling quite right.
don't know quite why
things dont look like they fit.
what causes the fever?
aggression jealousy loneliness
fear? or the past?
something has slipped.
i can sense it sliding
crawling kicking up
unsettling the delicately arranged...
i know its me it must be.
i'm not angry, just a little mad
but sanity is relative.
do not beware that sickened stare;
it only creates chaos.
the solution is near, i can feel it
and i will find it before you notice.
ha. i am that sure.
trust me this time. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 13 [informant] => AzurePaladin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Unsettled

Contributed by AzurePaladin on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

not feeling quite right.
don't know quite why
things dont look like they fit.
what causes the fever?
aggression jealousy loneliness
fear? or the past?
something has slipped.
i can sense it sliding
crawling kicking up
unsettling the delicately arranged...
i know its me it must be.
i'm not angry, just a little mad
but sanity is relative.
do not beware that sickened stare;
it only creates chaos.
the solution is near, i can feel it
and i will find it before you notice.
ha. i am that sure.
trust me this time.

Copyright © AzurePaladin ... [ 2003-01-24 01:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unsettled (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:50:43 PM AEST
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Yeah I know the feeling, those times when things just feel off...as for sanity, there's nothing wrong with losing it for awhile. Some of the greatest things in this world are created without it. Insanity or creativity? heh, no use dening anger...best thing to do is jus have at it yell at stuff when nobodys around...I do that in the car sometimes lol is good fun..or bash something with a blunt object, just be careful its something that wont be missed. -Nick-

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