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...that One Day on the Red Hills...

Contributed by chibimiroku on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:19:26 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



…That One Day on the Red Hills…

I stand a single pedestrian
Centered in a crowded street
Yet I see no other people
Nor hear the pat of shoed feet.

I try to pierce the ring of cloud
That hovers around, forever blocking my view
For as I step, it steps with me
This large tinted lens from my glasses askew.

My feet follow a path my eyes cannot see
My eyes see images my mind cannot comprehend
My glimpses are of people, places, events;
This influx of color seems to have no end.

I stop and ponder a moment
About this road, with no scenery or sky
I step back in wonder and realize…
That this is my life, passing me by.




Copyright © chibimiroku ... [ 2005-12-04 02:19:26]
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Re: ...that One Day on the Red Hills... (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:26:31 AM AEST
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man, i know the feeling, and i can easily relate, well done expressing yourself here.


SM


Re: ...that One Day on the Red Hills... (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 04:01:18 PM AEST
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Well Vincent you know how much I love ur work. It's always a pleasure to read ur remarkable work my dear friend. I can relate to ur write so much. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
~sue~




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