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Array ( [sid] => 110888 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My tears can scream no more [time] => 2005-12-04 02:16:11 [hometext] => i dont know what the heck im feeling right now.....i am so lost and confused........give me some spiritual advice [bodytext] => dancing beneath

this ebon chandelier

with an array of stars weeping

i cry to god

and hope he hears

LISTEN!!! LISTEN TO MY CRY

why do i hear not your reply?

i beg and i plead....

within this hour of need

i am lost, and i am drowning

i am drifting toward distant shores

across this lonely sea of silence

i am searching,

but i don't seem to be finding

the holiness that evades me

washed away within an empty roar

SILENCE IS ALL YOU HEAR!

like my cry's

lost in the sending

whisked away by a sad song

dyeing in the wind

neath falling embers of the night time sky

released by my tattered hope

and shattered by the tears i cry

perhaps i have been deaf

and haven't listened to your myriad lullabies

entwined with reverent words

but all i want to hear

is you whisper my name

and banish this silence

that resounds within my brain

..........(silence)..........

Wrapped in robes of dusk, I’m waiting
For my morning rise
To replace my tears with dew,
And for a softly-whispered reassurance
To show me its innocent truth
For I fear I have forgotten
your voice

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My tears can scream no more

Contributed by socialmisfit on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

dancing beneath

this ebon chandelier

with an array of stars weeping

i cry to god

and hope he hears

LISTEN!!! LISTEN TO MY CRY

why do i hear not your reply?

i beg and i plead....

within this hour of need

i am lost, and i am drowning

i am drifting toward distant shores

across this lonely sea of silence

i am searching,

but i don't seem to be finding

the holiness that evades me

washed away within an empty roar

SILENCE IS ALL YOU HEAR!

like my cry's

lost in the sending

whisked away by a sad song

dyeing in the wind

neath falling embers of the night time sky

released by my tattered hope

and shattered by the tears i cry

perhaps i have been deaf

and haven't listened to your myriad lullabies

entwined with reverent words

but all i want to hear

is you whisper my name

and banish this silence

that resounds within my brain

..........(silence)..........

Wrapped in robes of dusk, I’m waiting
For my morning rise
To replace my tears with dew,
And for a softly-whispered reassurance
To show me its innocent truth
For I fear I have forgotten
your voice

Copyright Â© socialmisfit ... [ 2005-12-04 02:16:11]
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Re: My tears can scream no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:58:06 AM AEST
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This is just my opinion, of course..but you're trying too hard. Like scrambling for your car keys when they are right there on the end table.

We're all connected, whether we want to be or not. We all have that point inside of us that plugs us into the rest of this mess we've coined the 'cosmos.' The nexus of existence. Just learn to be yourself without fear and the rest will fall into place.

Re: My tears can scream no more (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:29:19 PM AEST
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well done

Re: My tears can scream no more (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:17:33 AM AEST
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Hey... be yourself... i've heard someone give you that advice before... now who was that??? le *sigh* oh mike you silly head.

Re: My tears can scream no more (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:10:54 AM AEST
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Anyone that can write a plea like this is definently in tune with our creater.
As u might know I don't do religion but am tottally in luv with God, (luv).
One thing I'm 100% Jesus kid!
I find that I have to get out of my own human wants, needs, desires to be tottally in tune with our creator.
Go to your mirror every day and tell yourself, "I know I'm somebody 'cause God don't make no junk.
Jus beleive it.
I'll put u in my prayers and please pm me any time.
luv, huggs, prayer, peace, joy, luv to u-n-yours,
emy

Re: My tears can scream no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:09:40 AM AEST
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WoW. Emy's summed it all up for me.
A very well penned piece of poetry.
Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: My tears can scream no more (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 12:50:30 AM AEST
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Sometimes silence is what is needed to hear God the clearest. Life happens. Then it stops. Keep going. And never live for the past.

Mandy

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