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Nobody Special
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:09:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Your nobody special
just an ugly little girl
your nothing fantastic
you should just become a quitter.
Thats it little girl
make it deeper
feel that thick red blood
run hot across your skin.
No one loves you child
why are you even here?
Just go away
dissapear...
Deeper deeper;
keep cutting deeper
you can still feel the pain inside
only cuts will make it subside.
You will never be loved
not like you hope.
No one wants you
your a ******* joke.
Become a quitter little girl
Just simply dissapear
No one will miss you
you were never here.
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Shattered_soul
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Re: Nobody Special
(User Rating: 1 ) by silent on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:23:52 AM AEST (User
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Had to comment on this one, alot of poetry on this topic to me really doesn't feel too deep, but this is different. This has a real connection with the reader and makes you think deeply, well it did me anyway. If you are feeling like this i am so sorry for you because no-one should be made to feel like this. If you want to just say hello or something i would love to hear from you, just pm me, otherwise i love your work and i will keep an eye on you for more of your poems. 5 stars
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Re: Nobody Special
(User Rating: 1 ) by enigma on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 03:39:38 PM AEST (User
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...that is an awfully scary feeling...insignificance, worthlessness, nothing special...I was there once...at least in the same neighborhood...when I was there, there wasn't anything anybody could say that had a chance of touching the heart of my distorted perceptions...I believed in those curved mirrors, cause that was what I grew up with...they were what I was told reality was...they most definitely were not true...they were horrible lies...
...so, even though you probably won't be able to hear this or live in its truth, I'm going to say it anyway...
...You are Beautiful...you are in every way as capable as the one you admire the most, and the one you admire the most is as lacking in essential ability as you are...you are no less valuable than any of us...you are no more valuable than any of us...that others are unable to recognize your Beauty doesn't mean you are not Beautiful...that you might not be able to recognize your own Beauty doesn't mean you are not Beautiful...any experience that causes you to consider yourself less than Beautiful is a lie...
...it took me fifty-three years to discover this, but there wasn't a day went by that I was not Beautiul...
...I'll shut up....I just want you to know, there is a future...a Beautiful future...I listen as well as I talk...if you want to bend my ear sometime, e-mail me...
ron...enigma |
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