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Array ( [sid] => 110874 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => it was fake [time] => 2005-12-03 23:33:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i talk to on the screen
everyday after school
but i know i take ur words the wrong way
i am such a fool
when you said the words that you did
i thought that maybe u actually cared
that if i were to fall
you would be there
i should have known all along
i thought you ment the words that you said
i guess that i thought wrong
the tone of her voice
when she told me what she said
that's when everything
clicked in my head
'don't let her stop
she needs a friend'
that's why he said
the words that he did
he didn't mean them
not a single one
and here i thought
a friendship was won
but i guess nothing
turns out like it should
and in this world
there is little good

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 43 [informant] => needs_change [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

it was fake

Contributed by needs_change on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 11:33:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

i talk to on the screen
everyday after school
but i know i take ur words the wrong way
i am such a fool
when you said the words that you did
i thought that maybe u actually cared
that if i were to fall
you would be there
i should have known all along
i thought you ment the words that you said
i guess that i thought wrong
the tone of her voice
when she told me what she said
that's when everything
clicked in my head
'don't let her stop
she needs a friend'
that's why he said
the words that he did
he didn't mean them
not a single one
and here i thought
a friendship was won
but i guess nothing
turns out like it should
and in this world
there is little good

Copyright © needs_change ... [ 2005-12-03 23:33:21]
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Re: it was fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Ari on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 11:37:22 PM AEST
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well written poem, although i need to disagree with your ending....while there is some not so good things with this world there is lots of really good, you just gotta wait and have hope

peace, love, happiness always
Ari

Re: it was fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:05:27 PM AEST
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This was a really good poem! I really feel for you.

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