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Because you didn't accept the way, that I'd prepared your food,
Foul spirit's and grumpiness, for the way I'd ironed your shirt,
Bad temper and drunkeness, you treated me like dirt.

Jealousy of our children, when they took up my time,
You shouted when the washing was still hanging on the line,
Smashing up our home, when you felt great aggresion,
Anger at a dirty plate, you showed so much expression.

I kept our vows of marriage, though you could never be,
My pillar of strength, devoted to his wife and family,
Of your constant criticism, I now endure no strife,
My life was truly blessed - when I stopped being your wife.
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IN MEMORY OF YOU

Contributed by Septic on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Stony silences I suffered, when you were in a mood,
Because you didn't accept the way, that I'd prepared your food,
Foul spirit's and grumpiness, for the way I'd ironed your shirt,
Bad temper and drunkeness, you treated me like dirt.

Jealousy of our children, when they took up my time,
You shouted when the washing was still hanging on the line,
Smashing up our home, when you felt great aggresion,
Anger at a dirty plate, you showed so much expression.

I kept our vows of marriage, though you could never be,
My pillar of strength, devoted to his wife and family,
Of your constant criticism, I now endure no strife,
My life was truly blessed - when I stopped being your wife.

Copyright © Septic ... [ 2003-01-23 23:00:00]
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Re: IN MEMORY OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:15:33 PM AEST
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AAWW THis was truly a touching write,sad to say things were like this for you!
I hope you are much happier now! Good poem! Christina

Re: IN MEMORY OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:25:14 PM AEST
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amen to that..

Re: IN MEMORY OF YOU (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:02:47 AM AEST
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Fantastically written with such powerful emotion and energy. The stanzas are wonderful and contain real deep and meaningful spice. Can't wait to read more of your poetry.

Re: IN MEMORY OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:28:44 AM AEST
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AWW very touching indeed , how can a person be that unhuman! u should've get the divorce earlier , anyway im glad u did :)
good luck ...
GINA

Re: IN MEMORY OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Misha on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 09:18:55 PM AEST
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congrats on your escape!!! love it!!

Re: IN MEMORY OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Bubbles420 on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 04:02:39 PM AEST
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You expresss your feelings beautifully! Great job!

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