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[title] => Savior of Vanish
[time] => 2002-07-25 11:28:24
[hometext] => This poem originally had no title, but the one i posted is the title i gave it when i entered it in a contest. The title and the poem it's self i never really thought on, they just came to me. Comments will be much appreciated. This is the first poem i am posting so i hope it is enjoyed.
[bodytext] => Save me now, Hold me forever agianist a moonlit sky
Shut my eyes, Keep me close and force the world to go by
Yet yeild me please to the bending trees who give mercy to all darkness bound
Clasp my ankles, Stab my wrists and force me onto the ground
Powder my nose, Lace me in bows and lead me to forget the past
Sharpen my ears, Strengthen my bones and make me something to last
Warm my skin, slow my heart and allow me a moment
of breath
For none the world matters now, Tis' in you i find my death
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[alanguage] => english
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[score] => 40
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => MiscPoems
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Savior of Vanish
Contributed by
xFalling_of_Starsx
on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:28:24 AM in AEST
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Save me now, Hold me forever agianist a moonlit sky
Shut my eyes, Keep me close and force the world to go by
Yet yeild me please to the bending trees who give mercy to all darkness bound
Clasp my ankles, Stab my wrists and force me onto the ground
Powder my nose, Lace me in bows and lead me to forget the past
Sharpen my ears, Strengthen my bones and make me something to last
Warm my skin, slow my heart and allow me a moment
of breath
For none the world matters now, Tis' in you i find my death
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by PS_iloveyou on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:54:20 AM AEST
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| Nicely wrote. Will be looking for more ... |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by Clarity on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:58:18 AM AEST
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| i really like this, can't wait to read more of your work |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by Mud on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 01:51:51 PM AEST
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| brilliant. really like your style of writing. more please. |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 03:34:46 PM AEST
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this is good... this is very very good. I like poems that make me think... and this one makes me think. Great write!!! Please post more!!!
*Ginsdance* |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 03:43:03 PM AEST
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wow this is wonderful I do hope to read more of your work
~~~Lasca~~~ |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 05:25:28 PM AEST
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I thought this exceptional!
Great write.......loved your style
Rgds
Dave |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 05:29:42 PM AEST
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A breathtaking poem...I really love it and look forward to reading more of yours.
Chrissie
Thankyou very much for your kind comment on " Be Still " |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 08:45:40 PM AEST
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first poem I read this morning and its such a powerful one too. You made me catch my breath here. I wonder though, there must have been a spark in your mind somewhere to write this.....
excellant poetry, will be waiting for more. |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by orgygirl on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:26:57 AM AEST
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Hey sweety! Im glad I got you to publish a poem on here. This poem is really amazing like all your other works... This one is my favorite out of your collection. *so proud* Love ya.
-Rebecca |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by SA_RA on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:18:51 PM AEST
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great work, keep up the writing!
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by zer0 on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 12:24:53 PM AEST
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| indeed, good write. contrast with strength and weakness. it seems also to hint of lost romance, or maybe that's just the flirting with death.. nice one. |
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Re: Savior of Vanish
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by xXIronSharpensIronXx on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:03:37 PM AEST
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| Amazing... this poem moved me. Great job. |
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