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this could end in tragedy
and i could fall into a hole
where no one could ever find me
forgiving you could keep us together
but forgetting is impossible to do
this thorn digging into my side
is making me so confused
there is no line to be drawn
as we stand on shaky ground
the boundaries have all been smashed
and we continue spinning around
i wish i could make a decision
i wish that i could forget
trusting you is impossible to do
and this time I'll admit
being alone is painful
but your kind of love is too
i'd rather be alone than always wondering
when the time came again for you to be cruel [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 32 [informant] => AnastasiaN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Mistake

Contributed by AnastasiaN on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 05:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

there's a chance this could be a mistake
this could end in tragedy
and i could fall into a hole
where no one could ever find me
forgiving you could keep us together
but forgetting is impossible to do
this thorn digging into my side
is making me so confused
there is no line to be drawn
as we stand on shaky ground
the boundaries have all been smashed
and we continue spinning around
i wish i could make a decision
i wish that i could forget
trusting you is impossible to do
and this time I'll admit
being alone is painful
but your kind of love is too
i'd rather be alone than always wondering
when the time came again for you to be cruel

Copyright © AnastasiaN ... [ 2005-12-02 17:09:54]
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Re: Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 07:16:57 PM AEST
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good write just want you to know take your time and what you find is ok with me just dont jump with out looking around if its yes ill be happy but if not ill have to try to go on haha sounds easy to say but hard to do but the pain i gave is hard for you just dont run away i love you but you said once love is not every thing alot more has to be done really good write tasia.

brad

Re: Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 10:21:43 PM AEST
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very emotional write .. sad but nice^_^I like

the last two lines I'd rather be alone than
always wondering when the time came again
for you to be cruel

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