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Of a treasured past now lost and cold;
An icy grasp on a life so fine
Brought to ruins by the exposed divine!
The beauty there had not a place
In a modern world whose greedy face
Looks upon the rarest jewel with lust,
The broken chain, the broken trust... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 474 [topic] => 8 [informant] => ruby_dreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

Ruins

Contributed by ruby_dreamer on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:38:24 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

O hail the winds, secrets they hold!
Of a treasured past now lost and cold;
An icy grasp on a life so fine
Brought to ruins by the exposed divine!
The beauty there had not a place
In a modern world whose greedy face
Looks upon the rarest jewel with lust,
The broken chain, the broken trust...

Copyright © ruby_dreamer ... [ 2005-12-02 02:38:24]
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Re: Ruins (User Rating: 1 )
by ndat on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:04:51 AM AEST
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It is good, but it is cliched so it is rather boring. Try delving a little deeper into both cultures and find something not written about so much, it would be a lot more intereasting of a read.

Re: Ruins (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 09:51:41 AM AEST
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I didn't intend to expose much of either culture. In fact, it's supposed to be crafted in a way that would make you not think it was about the Indians at all. Cliched? Really? Hmmm...I see no such thing, but if you say so...thanks for the advice.

Re: Ruins (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:57:46 PM AEST
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Ruby_Dreamer I am so fascinated and intrigued by ur remarkable work. The more I read the more I like. Very gifted and talented.
Sometimes so few words can say so much. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~

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