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Array ( [sid] => 110740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => underneath the stars [time] => 2005-12-02 00:14:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you and me
on a blanket
underneath the stars
its so beautiful
but not as beautiful
as the love in our hearts

we lay there looking up
at a million stars in the sky
i'm cuddled up in your arms
and the time is slowly going by

it's so peaceful
being there with you
just you and me
under a big sky full of stars
and a big bright full moon

you tell me of the love
you have for me
as i lie there looking at you
and listening to you speak

now we're kissing
and you're touching me softly
your touch feels so good
as i ask you to make love to me

then later as we leave our place of love
for the night
i think how lucky i am
to have you in my life [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => cherylleighh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

underneath the stars

Contributed by cherylleighh on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:14:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you and me
on a blanket
underneath the stars
its so beautiful
but not as beautiful
as the love in our hearts

we lay there looking up
at a million stars in the sky
i'm cuddled up in your arms
and the time is slowly going by

it's so peaceful
being there with you
just you and me
under a big sky full of stars
and a big bright full moon

you tell me of the love
you have for me
as i lie there looking at you
and listening to you speak

now we're kissing
and you're touching me softly
your touch feels so good
as i ask you to make love to me

then later as we leave our place of love
for the night
i think how lucky i am
to have you in my life

Copyright © cherylleighh ... [ 2005-12-02 00:14:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: underneath the stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:41:30 AM AEST
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A romantically beautiful write. I love the stars and the night sky. Always so magical and enthralling. A great enjoybable poem. well done.
*hugs*
~sue~

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