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untitled
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:04:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Cold and alone
The darkness it brings
Shivering bodies
Shimmering lights
Colors surrounding
As we look with glowing eyes
People all over
Bring happiness and tears
Days seem normal
But they're really unique
Listen carefully to the wind
As it slowly moves by
And before you know it
Winter disappears
Like a forgotten season
Not many think much of
Winter is a time
Of everchanging life
Copyright ©
unlovedchild
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2005-12-02 00:04:54]
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Re: untitled
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:43:45 AM AEST
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I really like poems about seasons and this is done so well. I like the way you've presented this. Thanks so much for sharing ur great work with us.
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Re: untitled
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by Lin54 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 05:15:01 PM AEST
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Good poem--I sensed the cold in your poem and the reminding that this too will pass!
Good job!
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