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[sid] => 110719
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Bleeding Blue
[time] => 2005-12-01 18:30:51
[hometext] => Goodbye YPDC, thankyou to all of the people who made this place like a home. I love you all. Phil xxx
[bodytext] => I held on with both hands,
And tried to speak the words to the page,
I wondered if the ink would stain my lips,
In another murky blue
Because I knew too much of blue,
Felt it course through my veins,
Like tepid water,
Stagnant and smelling of anger.
In every word, it bled onto the page.
It made my hands ache,
I knew the heart inside had stopped its beat,
And your heart had faded like a dream,
Until there was nothing left to hold on to.
So now I think I'll take my pen,
And write again,
Because I'm letting go.
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[counter] => 266
[topic] => 48
[informant] => lostinmyself
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 16
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
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Bleeding Blue
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I held on with both hands,
And tried to speak the words to the page,
I wondered if the ink would stain my lips,
In another murky blue
Because I knew too much of blue,
Felt it course through my veins,
Like tepid water,
Stagnant and smelling of anger.
In every word, it bled onto the page.
It made my hands ache,
I knew the heart inside had stopped its beat,
And your heart had faded like a dream,
Until there was nothing left to hold on to.
So now I think I'll take my pen,
And write again,
Because I'm letting go.
Copyright ©
lostinmyself
... [
2005-12-01 18:30:51]
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:35:08 PM AEST
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Phill, I sent you a private message and I do hope that you change your mind and not leave. You have been such an inspiration here and everything you have done has been deeply appreciated by not only myself but so many of us. It will not be the same without you.
*sniffles*
huge hugsss
Michelle |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 09:11:01 PM AEST
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Sweet Phillygirl
I said what I needed to about you leaving in the forums ... but as for this incredible work
of art! whoa! What wondrous magnificence comes from heartache, no? God, how
poetic and emotive this one is, dearest Phil. I love your word usage. It's incredible!
I can say this with all sincerity. Damn! I wish I'd written that! Brilliant title as well. All in all,
this was talent, through and through.
In awe and deeply saddened....
*hugs you tons*
~Breezy
(who shall never be the same ... ) |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 11:09:17 PM AEST
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| you can let go of the site philly, but never let go of your pen or what you can do with it, afterall only a few miracle writers come along every so often. a lot can be learned about you from this poem, and that makes this poem worth the reading. the fact you can write it well, also makes it a bonus to read. just remember philly, with any decision...make the right one, not the easy one. |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 11:12:33 PM AEST
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I wish you would stay philly hirl.
I am going to miss you.
love and hugs |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:17:04 PM AEST
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*smiles warmly at the Irishman's Irish-editing*
I am so glad you're staying, Phyllis. And we will all see these days through, I just know it.
Andrew |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:19:20 PM AEST
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| sad. sorry. i barely got to know you. what i do know of you was kindness for your help on two occasions which were two occasions that were needed, a friend you were to me when i was at my lowest. i hope you change your mind, i really do. raquel leah who finds it hard to write a comment from tears |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 07:46:44 AM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((((( PhillyGirl ))))))))))))))))))))
I hope you make your "trial run" a permanent stay.
Such an emotional write
In this bittersweet plight
I hope you decide to stay
For this I do solemnly pray
Many a friend you have here
So I ask that you worry not
Over a selfish rotten lot
Because the rest us get a thrill
From our beautiful girl named, Phil
Please stay, PhillyG :-)
Sincerely,
Tim
:-)
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 03:48:30 PM AEST
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(((((((((((Phil))))))))))) u leave they win simple as that and i know u like 2 win, end of story lol
phil your more than a member u r ypdc, your
a veteran and more important, your a writter
that's what this place is about not a social club, your above all the pettiness of this place keep writting write not for your friends but the some one out there who realy needs what u have 2 offer, at least people like u here and would miss u i could die and no one would care less, the thruth is, taking this place serious can be hazardes 2 your health cause of the stress, like u realy need that,?please stay though i suport u what ever u decide and if it's personal reasons then by all means don't let any one talk u into staying, but only u know what's in your heart,
in any case great writting it certainly got 2 me.
your friend unconditionaly
(((((((((Phil)))))))))).
Ben
Ben |
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Re: Bleeding Blue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 06:08:32 PM AEST
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| wonderful write as always ,, please keep em coming ,,,coz yer a good writer,,,hugs you me |
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