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Array ( [sid] => 110694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black and White [time] => 2005-12-01 11:52:41 [hometext] => this ones old, and now i've found someone who loves me as i love them :) so i dont feel like this anymore [bodytext] => black and white there are no colors,
slowly fading with each passing shade.
as soon to beceome nothing,
which like my future is worthless.
"Lies", all your voice is saying.
slowly eatting at me,
causing me to drowned in this so called life.
"I Love You", screaming it like your def,
but one day you'll hear me,
by then it'll be to late.
I'll be gone,
far from this earth.
far from these people.
I'm tired, i hope you know
Tired of the water of life slowly falling from mine eyes. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 13 [informant] => fake_emptyness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Black and White

Contributed by fake_emptyness on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 11:52:41 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

black and white there are no colors,
slowly fading with each passing shade.
as soon to beceome nothing,
which like my future is worthless.
"Lies", all your voice is saying.
slowly eatting at me,
causing me to drowned in this so called life.
"I Love You", screaming it like your def,
but one day you'll hear me,
by then it'll be to late.
I'll be gone,
far from this earth.
far from these people.
I'm tired, i hope you know
Tired of the water of life slowly falling from mine eyes.

Copyright © fake_emptyness ... [ 2005-12-01 11:52:41]
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Re: Black and White (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:51:08 PM AEST
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very sad write, very obvious to the senses, heart felt RL

Re: Black and White (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST
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Well written, and jam packed with emotions.

"I love you", screaming it like your deaf,
but one day you'll hear me,
by then it'll be too late.

Powerful writing.. keep it up.

Re: Black and White (User Rating: 1 )
by tacit_pain on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:58:01 PM AEST
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It's a really good poem, it sucks though....becuase I know you personally, and this poem makes my chest hurt knowing that you felt like that.

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