Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 13:36:39 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 110652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life Passed [time] => 2005-11-30 18:19:04 [hometext] => The story a dying woman returning to the place she had always felt union with.I guess we all have a spiritual home somewhere out there [bodytext] => Back home again, though home it had never been in the physical
Yet always in the spiritual since the very first time
Something about here,the land of whitewashed houses that haunted memory
Where gulls dipped low in perfect skies that could easily have been painted by the artist's brush
The ideal canvas on which to give her time its full stop

The first time, as a young woman she had bathed in the calm of early morning sea
Waked barefoot over sand dunes to the dying of the sun
Now dying too her final wish fulfilled, the wanderer returned
Contrasting fortunes, a place unchanged by passing days
To a face changed older, accepting fate with arms wide open

Death was to be, stage now set for the last curtain call
The finale of life, here the heart would lay to sleep
Over the pines her spirit could soar, rise like an eagle
Float with ease over sundappled sails of passing ships
By harbour lanterns pass unnoticed through wandering crowds

Breath was more shallow now, gasping at times
Sleep like the spin of a roulette wheel, chance to re-awake
As the still of night descended, gentle breezes swept the room
By morning empty silence stood, life passed [comments] => 5 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 32 [informant] => puppy_dog_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Life Passed

Contributed by puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:19:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Back home again, though home it had never been in the physical
Yet always in the spiritual since the very first time
Something about here,the land of whitewashed houses that haunted memory
Where gulls dipped low in perfect skies that could easily have been painted by the artist's brush
The ideal canvas on which to give her time its full stop

The first time, as a young woman she had bathed in the calm of early morning sea
Waked barefoot over sand dunes to the dying of the sun
Now dying too her final wish fulfilled, the wanderer returned
Contrasting fortunes, a place unchanged by passing days
To a face changed older, accepting fate with arms wide open

Death was to be, stage now set for the last curtain call
The finale of life, here the heart would lay to sleep
Over the pines her spirit could soar, rise like an eagle
Float with ease over sundappled sails of passing ships
By harbour lanterns pass unnoticed through wandering crowds

Breath was more shallow now, gasping at times
Sleep like the spin of a roulette wheel, chance to re-awake
As the still of night descended, gentle breezes swept the room
By morning empty silence stood, life passed




Copyright © puppy_dog_eyes ... [ 2005-11-30 18:19:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Life Passed (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:57:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I feel, being home, isnt meant in a material sense as life isnt about materialism. Sadly many do think of it that way. Home is where the heart lays, is how the saying goes and I believe it is true.

Wonderful write!

Nats


Re: Life Passed (User Rating: 1 )
by Tenthpower10 on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:25:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
ur right, home is anywhere that u love. not necessarily where u live or something. where u love


Re: Life Passed (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:42:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
awwwwwww sad but good.


Re: Life Passed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 01:25:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
The yearning of going home, home where her heart now lies, I really love your spiritual painting, every heart needs this empowerment from our spiritual home, when our last breath, comes home to re- unite with the spiritual (winds.) Raquel Leah :D


Re: Life Passed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 01:31:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wowsteve,
u've written a very moving masterpeice!
huggs,
emy




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com