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Array ( [sid] => 110648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => too late ,im gone [time] => 2005-11-30 17:27:51 [hometext] => hey this poem is about my life,when i thought id lost the only person in my life that mattered the most to me my boyfriend!its about leaving things to late n the concequences!hope u like it!please comment!thankz [bodytext] => As I sit here crying
I think I’m dying
Everyone’s watching
Not realising
The pain, the tears
The constant screaming
Will this kill me?
Stop me breathing
Will anyone notice?
Before its ending
Or will they just lay there
Watch me stop living
Will this ever stop?
Never ending, forever
For sure this has killed me
No more breathing
Wake me up
Am I dreaming?
Find myself lying
Dead on the floor
He’s shouting
Is she alive?
Will she survive?
Someone replies
No heart beating
I stand over watching
He falls to his knees
I’m sorry
It had to be this way
Don’t hate me plz
He knells over me
Tears in his eyes
Saying I love you baby
Please come back to me
Don’t leave me here
U were the answer
To all my fears
You were my dream
I bought a ring
Today was the day
I was gonna ask
For your hand
I say to him
But he cannot hear
Because I am gone
And so are my fears
You are too late
I’m gone forever
But ill be waiting
Cause your time
Will come
To leave everyone
And join me in heaven
Where your fears
Will be gone
And when you do
Well meet again
Ill be waiting for you
To take my hand
And as I do
You’ll say to me
I love thee
Will you marry me?
And well live forever
In eternity
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too late ,im gone

Contributed by Devils_Angel on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 05:27:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



As I sit here crying
I think I’m dying
Everyone’s watching
Not realising
The pain, the tears
The constant screaming
Will this kill me?
Stop me breathing
Will anyone notice?
Before its ending
Or will they just lay there
Watch me stop living
Will this ever stop?
Never ending, forever
For sure this has killed me
No more breathing
Wake me up
Am I dreaming?
Find myself lying
Dead on the floor
He’s shouting
Is she alive?
Will she survive?
Someone replies
No heart beating
I stand over watching
He falls to his knees
I’m sorry
It had to be this way
Don’t hate me plz
He knells over me
Tears in his eyes
Saying I love you baby
Please come back to me
Don’t leave me here
U were the answer
To all my fears
You were my dream
I bought a ring
Today was the day
I was gonna ask
For your hand
I say to him
But he cannot hear
Because I am gone
And so are my fears
You are too late
I’m gone forever
But ill be waiting
Cause your time
Will come
To leave everyone
And join me in heaven
Where your fears
Will be gone
And when you do
Well meet again
Ill be waiting for you
To take my hand
And as I do
You’ll say to me
I love thee
Will you marry me?
And well live forever
In eternity




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Re: too late ,im gone (User Rating: 1 )
by CjayUK on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 05:32:24 PM AEST
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hey tis amazing, you should me it before but still it gets better everytime a read it babez
love ya hunnie xxx


Re: too late ,im gone (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:59:17 PM AEST
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this is amazing




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