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Array ( [sid] => 110629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I thought you were love [time] => 2005-11-30 09:55:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No longer aggrieved by your silence
I couldn't care less
But I am so tired of the violence
And I thought you were love

The thoughts you share with me
Such things you say...
You brought me to think you'd set me free
And I thought you were love

Yet, you're the one with the shackles
You're the one held by chains
You're the one without love
running through your veins

And I thought you were love...


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I thought you were love

Contributed by Davinah on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 09:55:51 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



No longer aggrieved by your silence
I couldn't care less
But I am so tired of the violence
And I thought you were love

The thoughts you share with me
Such things you say...
You brought me to think you'd set me free
And I thought you were love

Yet, you're the one with the shackles
You're the one held by chains
You're the one without love
running through your veins

And I thought you were love...






Copyright © Davinah ... [ 2005-11-30 09:55:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I thought you were love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:21:56 AM AEST
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Nice...


Re: I thought you were love (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:41:41 PM AEST
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Love can be deceptive that's true.Sometimes you convince yourself you are in it when you never were.
Nice work

Steve


Re: I thought you were love (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:18:37 PM AEST
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Honest and to the heart. I liked it a lot and i hope to
read more; it was nice to see the repetition of the title
throughout the poem... it really helped emphasize
the despairing line:

And I thought you were love....

Take care!




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