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Array ( [sid] => 110577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Last Stance [time] => 2005-11-29 15:26:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => why must it be this way
why wont you let me say what i need to say
that this hurts so bad
making me feel constintly sad

there has never been a time when i could be close to you
Now its to late and i dont really care
But it still seems to hurt
For an emptyness in me will never be filled
But i dont seem to care anymore

Leave me alone in my fantasy world
The one you say loving her is not right
A world that only exist in my mind,
cause loving another isnt reality

ill make my life what i want
ill do what i want
ill have everything and more that you never had
ill make something of my self
prove you wrong, im not a failure

i wont be like you
in no way, not ever
ill raise my kids the right way
tell them things they need to hear,
everything you never said
ill support them with what they do
and ill never tell them their goals arnt reality

and everything you said that made me feel all this pain,
all this guilt
everything you should never say to your child,
ill never say its their fault their mothers slowly dying
and you have no idea what that blame does to a kid

im finally writing what i could never say
something i could never feel
but its at this moment i know

im not just some dyke, im a lesbian and proud
im going to be something, not a high school drop out
im going to accomplish what you could never dream
im going to be everything your not
cause i swear to myself ill never be like you
ill do everything you could never do [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 48 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
My Last Stance

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



why must it be this way
why wont you let me say what i need to say
that this hurts so bad
making me feel constintly sad

there has never been a time when i could be close to you
Now its to late and i dont really care
But it still seems to hurt
For an emptyness in me will never be filled
But i dont seem to care anymore

Leave me alone in my fantasy world
The one you say loving her is not right
A world that only exist in my mind,
cause loving another isnt reality

ill make my life what i want
ill do what i want
ill have everything and more that you never had
ill make something of my self
prove you wrong, im not a failure

i wont be like you
in no way, not ever
ill raise my kids the right way
tell them things they need to hear,
everything you never said
ill support them with what they do
and ill never tell them their goals arnt reality

and everything you said that made me feel all this pain,
all this guilt
everything you should never say to your child,
ill never say its their fault their mothers slowly dying
and you have no idea what that blame does to a kid

im finally writing what i could never say
something i could never feel
but its at this moment i know

im not just some dyke, im a lesbian and proud
im going to be something, not a high school drop out
im going to accomplish what you could never dream
im going to be everything your not
cause i swear to myself ill never be like you
ill do everything you could never do




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Re: My Last Stance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:14:12 PM AEST
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You tell 'em grrl...and then prove them wrong. I was hoping things would have been better for you by now....
Miss ya..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: My Last Stance (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:52:38 PM AEST
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While this my be emotional I also thought
this was quite empowering and uplifting. Very
good write indeed and I loved it.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: My Last Stance (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 12:32:49 AM AEST
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Just Speaking From The Heart




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