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Array ( [sid] => 110525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A FATHERS BETRAIL [time] => 2005-11-28 16:52:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish I had a father
who was there all the time
but all I had was a ghost of one
that left when i was 2
you drank and smoked a lot
you even beat my mom
now after all these years of absence
You disown me via email

All I did was ask some questions
and you left me for the wolves
what a horrible father you have been
disowning me before you knew
all the horrible things that happend

I dreamed of the day we would first meet
that day came 5 years ago
you don't know what it was like
Without a father to look out for me

I cryed every night for one
I even prayed to god
I longed for one to appear
to sweep me away from the mess
but you never came
I wasn't even on ur mind
When you left the scene
But now I am
And the first thing you do
Is Disown ME

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 32 [informant] => StoneAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

A FATHERS BETRAIL

Contributed by StoneAngel on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 04:52:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wish I had a father
who was there all the time
but all I had was a ghost of one
that left when i was 2
you drank and smoked a lot
you even beat my mom
now after all these years of absence
You disown me via email

All I did was ask some questions
and you left me for the wolves
what a horrible father you have been
disowning me before you knew
all the horrible things that happend

I dreamed of the day we would first meet
that day came 5 years ago
you don't know what it was like
Without a father to look out for me

I cryed every night for one
I even prayed to god
I longed for one to appear
to sweep me away from the mess
but you never came
I wasn't even on ur mind
When you left the scene
But now I am
And the first thing you do
Is Disown ME

Copyright © StoneAngel ... [ 2005-11-28 16:52:36]
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Re: A FATHERS BETRAIL (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:12:15 PM AEST
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Your hurt is so evident here...this poem is terribly sad. I can feel that you have been betrayed here...excellent expressions.

Re: A FATHERS BETRAIL (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:25:43 PM AEST
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How do I read comment people posted about my poems.

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