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Another day.
Another night.
Soft knocking at the door.
She opens. He walks in.

The mild light of candles.
A bottle of champagne.
Some laughs.
Some whispers.

Sparks in her eyes;
lust in his.
A kiss.

She moans.
The climax.

The smell of melting wax.
The tired eyes.

The door is closed.
She is alone.
As always.

A day. A night.
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Midnight Guest

Contributed by WAE on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A day. A night.
Another day.
Another night.
Soft knocking at the door.
She opens. He walks in.

The mild light of candles.
A bottle of champagne.
Some laughs.
Some whispers.

Sparks in her eyes;
lust in his.
A kiss.

She moans.
The climax.

The smell of melting wax.
The tired eyes.

The door is closed.
She is alone.
As always.

A day. A night.
Another day.

Copyright © WAE ... [ 2005-11-28 14:34:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Midnight Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by FrostyFlaherty on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:37:50 PM AEST
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I liked it very visual. still it its still a little to simplistic.

Re: Midnight Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:44:02 PM AEST
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Thanks for comments, Frosty. The laconism or simplicity, if you wish, was deliberate...
Thanks again,
Alex

Re: Midnight Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:17:13 PM AEST
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Hmmm, I'm inclined to agree with Frosty, this is a little simplistic.

It's good how it's intended that way, but I think it's maybe a little too simple.

I must say though, I do love vague poems like this...

Anyway, good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx

Re: Midnight Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:54:18 PM AEST
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Hey Phil,
Thanks for stopping by... Long time, eh?
Well, what I can say... nothing... LOL
This one is two simple, another, I mean My precious Treasure is too wordy... LOL
Where is the golden middle?
Thanks,
Alex

Re: Midnight Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 06:18:30 PM AEST
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This is quite well-done. Simplistic, well, hmm. A bit, maybe, though I don't think that detracts from this piece. I like the flow and word-choices.

Well done.

Andrew

Re: Midnight Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:45:47 PM AEST
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Hey Andrew,
Thanks for support... LOL
How you been?

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