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This Is Today
Contributed by
jacobskk
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Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 11:58:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Broken like a loss of life,
And used downcast eyes.
This form of which I lived my life,
Was hidden with disguise.
No longer did I want to laugh,
The daylight stayed away.
I floated through the faces,
A Disfigured castaway.
The shadows underneath my eyes,
Cut a long story short.
A dark and empty room,
Was not much of a happy sort.
That was how I lived each day,
Before there was a you.
But yesterday is not today,
Today you love me too.
A lamp has placed it's brightly self,
Where once there were some lies.
You lifted up my chin to rid me,
Of these downcast eyes.
I have your love forever,
Much In each and every way.
Although I didn't always have it,
That was then, this is today.
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jacobskk
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2005-11-27 11:58:33]
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Re: This Is Today
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by silverscent on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:23:34 PM AEST
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| What a powerful poem, I really liked the emotions you put into this poem. Very well done! |
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Re: This Is Today
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 01:07:24 AM AEST
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My friend, what u have here is none other than a " MASTERPEICE " your exquisit
writting definately rings a bell as 2 how well
you present your art, beautiful no other words 2 discribe the way u write, your style is nothing short of perfection. welcome back.
Ben |
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