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Rainstorm on Mars
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:20:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sitting here in a rainstorm on Mars
Sitting here and my thoughts don't go far
Without thinking of the past and what laid here
Sitting here in a rainstorm on Mars
Although it's fairly bright for this time of year
Lighting, thunder over mountain ranges far off ahead
Although I'm the only one who hears it
Sitting here in a rainstorm on Mars
I wait for the skies to clear so I can see the stars
I come here to dream
We come here to leave ourselves
Sitting here in a rainstorm on Mars
Soaked by the rain
Cleansed by the storm
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Re: Rainstorm on Mars
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 03:38:26 PM AEST (User
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yeah, it is kinda random and is out there, but i liked it. it was a great write and you expressed yourself well in it!! good job!!! i'm taking it as mars is really earth and the weather and what not is life... sorta what i'm getting, it's hard to explain... but it was a good write, keep it up!
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