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Darkness hating nightmares
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 10:24:19 PM in AEST
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What the hell have i done,
Why must it be undone,
The light rushes in,
Burning pain from within,
Darkness hating nightmares,
More pain I'm in the more no one cares,
So eat up all these lies,
And ignore these painful cries.
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lonelywolf04
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2005-11-26 22:24:19]
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Re: Darkness hating nightmares
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:37:53 PM AEST
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Re: Darkness hating nightmares
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 03:45:20 PM AEST
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wow... i agree, very powerful. i like the way you wrote it and expressed yourself... well done. i am sorry for your pain and if you ever need to talk, PM me... great write, tho, keep up the great work!!
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