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Array ( [sid] => 110430 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my family [time] => 2005-11-26 19:42:50 [hometext] => im not asking for ppl to feel sry for me just writing about what i feel and whats happening with my life and to let others know if theres ppl like this out there then ur not alone [bodytext] => call my mom a whore
hurt us all a little bit more
a family means love
but thats not what u think of
your the only one who can hurt me with words
i can never make it one day with crying
i cut myself,thinking about dying
break a few cups and plates
make a few accuses for all your lates
make my brothers cry
who cares because they'll become depressd and wanna die
nothing will change its the same ***** everyday
mom says were gonna move away
that day will never come
she says that one to much
its the same ***** just on a different day
nothing will change
this is my life
this is my home
this is my family [comments] => 5 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 39 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

my family

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 07:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

call my mom a whore
hurt us all a little bit more
a family means love
but thats not what u think of
your the only one who can hurt me with words
i can never make it one day with crying
i cut myself,thinking about dying
break a few cups and plates
make a few accuses for all your lates
make my brothers cry
who cares because they'll become depressd and wanna die
nothing will change its the same ***** everyday
mom says were gonna move away
that day will never come
she says that one to much
its the same ***** just on a different day
nothing will change
this is my life
this is my home
this is my family

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-11-26 19:42:50]
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Re: my family (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 08:04:32 PM AEST
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Well, it is good that you just writing what's on your mind.. there is no reason to rebel against that. I have to say that a couple lines made my heart drop... to me they were very daring.

make my brothers cry
who cares because they'll become depressd and wanna die

There seems to be many things that people feel and when they are deep and... umm... "socially unacceptable"... no one wants to talk about them. They think about what someone else will think. Everyone knows very well that they think of things that others would say is unacceptable. To me... if you feel that way... freaking awesome. So... that is the reason why I truly enjoyed this write. Great job...

Re: my family (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 09:01:24 PM AEST
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I used to write poems such as these and I must say the older I get the sillier they seem. I guess you still have a lot of growing up to do. You will appreciate your family much more when you realize that they won't live forever. But feelings such as these do make very moving beautiful poems. So keep writing but just remember these hard times will come and go.

Re: my family (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 03:03:12 AM AEST
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the intensity and reality of the pain really comes through, but so does the attempt at resigning to the fact that things are s***, awesome write, talk to me if u wanna

Re: my family (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 06:29:52 PM AEST
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It is at least a cold comfort there are others suffering the same thing and we are not alone. Sometimes all you can do is scream among other things. Things generally get better later on unfortunately the damage has been done. I hope you can get through this and find some purpose to hang onto in this life we call so great......take care

Re: my family (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:30:27 PM AEST
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Aww.....Dee, you know that your family really does love and caref or you? Otherwise you would not have all those thigns you have, youb have manny many things in your life, you prolly wouldnt have a roof over your headm and everything. but other then that great write!!!
xxxKimxxx

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