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Array ( [sid] => 110407 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A simple piece of paper [time] => 2005-11-26 12:35:35 [hometext] => kinda cute i guess, give it what its worth.... i like comments :) Godbless [bodytext] => Why cant life be like a piece of paper?
A piece of paper can go through a lot!
crumpled, thrown away, used over and over again.
But when you mess up or make a mistake you simply just flip to another piece.
You have a blank slate, 2nd chance.
Thats how I want my life to be.
I know I have made so many mistakes.
So why is it so hard for me to just flip the piece of paper of my life?
I want to start over.
Clear start
Where I can live a life of no mistakes.
Why cant life simply be like a piece of paper?
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A simple piece of paper

Contributed by BEBE on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 12:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Why cant life be like a piece of paper?
A piece of paper can go through a lot!
crumpled, thrown away, used over and over again.
But when you mess up or make a mistake you simply just flip to another piece.
You have a blank slate, 2nd chance.
Thats how I want my life to be.
I know I have made so many mistakes.
So why is it so hard for me to just flip the piece of paper of my life?
I want to start over.
Clear start
Where I can live a life of no mistakes.
Why cant life simply be like a piece of paper?

Copyright © BEBE ... [ 2005-11-26 12:35:35]
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Re: A simple piece of paper (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:59:53 PM AEST
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Great write. Great questions. I suppose it would be a useless try, because it's still the same old paper. But - what if somehow, something, or, (someone) could transform that paper into a paper that could recognise mistakes (sins) before they are written on it (him), and give the paper (him) the ability to dodge the pen (sin)? The old paper doesn't have the ability yet - It must be recieved, super-naturally - as a gift: and if he ( the paper) still does get a little dirt on it (him) "now and then": -what if that same something, or (someone) could and (would) erase it, and make it clean again? Wouldn't that be wonderful? Of course, it would (He is). I think I understand your reason for the poem. It's the same as why I wrote this. Right? To cause people to search for a solution to carnel (Rom. 8:7)man's condition. God bless

Re: A simple piece of paper (User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 03:30:47 PM AEST
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WOW!! what a great write I love this!!

I wished my life was like a simple little piece of paper where I could start all over again!!

Re: A simple piece of paper (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 11:01:47 PM AEST
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I wished life was like a piece of paper. Things would be alot easier. If u make a mistake u can toss it out and start afresh.
I throughly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
~sue~

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