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Array ( [sid] => 110402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLooD BouND uNDeRGRouND [time] => 2005-11-26 10:47:53 [hometext] => Even though I am no longer suicidal... the memories of the feelings and the pain are great inspiration to write poetry... [bodytext] => Bound my hands, tie my feet,
Ball and chain, a watery defeat-
Choke out my words and the song i have been singing,
This blood bound underground, the sorrow i am bringing-

Taste the poison, burning my lips,
Drip it down, in small precise sips-
Body hanging loosely, from rope and board,
This blood bound underground, the piercing sword-

Gag in place, tightly around my mouth,
A sullen tear, down cheeks- runs south-
To tattered clothing and polluted air,
This blood bound underground, a badge i wear-

Gurgle softly, blood in lung and throat,
Lifeless body laying face down, pretending to float-
Accept false pretenses in the dead of night,
This blood bound underground, softly dimming light-

You are the keeper at the gate,
This is my faded life, out of time- i cannot wait-
Pleading and begging for one last chance,
This blood bound underground, a surprising hidden romance. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 36 [informant] => GorgeousXWaste [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

BLooD BouND uNDeRGRouND

Contributed by GorgeousXWaste on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 10:47:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Bound my hands, tie my feet,
Ball and chain, a watery defeat-
Choke out my words and the song i have been singing,
This blood bound underground, the sorrow i am bringing-

Taste the poison, burning my lips,
Drip it down, in small precise sips-
Body hanging loosely, from rope and board,
This blood bound underground, the piercing sword-

Gag in place, tightly around my mouth,
A sullen tear, down cheeks- runs south-
To tattered clothing and polluted air,
This blood bound underground, a badge i wear-

Gurgle softly, blood in lung and throat,
Lifeless body laying face down, pretending to float-
Accept false pretenses in the dead of night,
This blood bound underground, softly dimming light-

You are the keeper at the gate,
This is my faded life, out of time- i cannot wait-
Pleading and begging for one last chance,
This blood bound underground, a surprising hidden romance.

Copyright © GorgeousXWaste ... [ 2005-11-26 10:47:53]
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Re: BLooD BouND uNDeRGRouND (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:01:59 AM AEST
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hmmmm very interesting! But great write!, i am glad that you are not suicidal anymore! Lol i know what you mean, i still write about things in the past because they are such inspiration to me!
BEBE

Re: BLooD BouND uNDeRGRouND (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 02:32:46 AM AEST
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this is an awesome write...the darkness flows through these carefully placed words, well done

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