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Bubbles dancing upon my lips as my eyes behold the grapes;
O the food to my famished heart!
O the drink to my thirsty soul!
In the state of mind of a weary dreamer,
I give thought to the stars and their beckoning light.
If the moon were my drink,
It would act as my wine...
The grapes would be you,
And the stars would be my dancing bubbles. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 378 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ruby_dreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Moon Wine

Contributed by ruby_dreamer on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:39:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In my waking hours I can taste the sweet wine;
Bubbles dancing upon my lips as my eyes behold the grapes;
O the food to my famished heart!
O the drink to my thirsty soul!
In the state of mind of a weary dreamer,
I give thought to the stars and their beckoning light.
If the moon were my drink,
It would act as my wine...
The grapes would be you,
And the stars would be my dancing bubbles.

Copyright © ruby_dreamer ... [ 2005-11-26 02:39:32]
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Re: Moon Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:08:54 AM AEST
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SPLENDID!!!You have a wonderful gift dear. This poem was exquisite delight, and your descriptions were beautiful. Ahhhhhhhhif only everyone that writes poetry could compose such pretty images and leave their readers with wondrous feelings..........Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhthen we could see the wondrous world of imagination all around us.
Please let me welcome you aboard.......you are going to be a grand asset to YPDC, and thanking you for sharing your delicious Moon Wine.
Warm love
consue

Re: Moon Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by crow6279 on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 02:42:23 AM AEST
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I have written tens of thousands upon tens of thousands of words during my life...and will never be able to match the quiet intensity of this submission. Congratulations

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