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Creep through my flesh
Paining my being
Making a mess

Goat Song I feel you
Blacken my soul
Tasting my sadness
Eating me whole

Goat Song I feel you
Tear at my heart
Forcing me loveless
Take me apart

Goat Song I feel you
Hallow me out
Stealing the things that
I can't live without

Goat Song you've left me
With nothing to feel
So hard to explain
Something so real

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Goat Song

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 04:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Goat Song I feel you
Creep through my flesh
Paining my being
Making a mess

Goat Song I feel you
Blacken my soul
Tasting my sadness
Eating me whole

Goat Song I feel you
Tear at my heart
Forcing me loveless
Take me apart

Goat Song I feel you
Hallow me out
Stealing the things that
I can't live without

Goat Song you've left me
With nothing to feel
So hard to explain
Something so real

Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-11-25 16:54:30]
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Re: Goat Song (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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Very good poem from the beginning to the end.
your words moved strongly from verse to verse as you move to the last verse and your heart is torn from you and all the love stored
within.
sojourner,

Re: Goat Song (User Rating: 1 )
by graci on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 06:05:52 PM AEST
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moving!

Re: Goat Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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Nice one. Just remember we all sing our own song, and it isn't always as tightly structured as a radio hit. The more you move in one direction opens up that much more space to go in the other.

Re: Goat Song (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 08:11:59 AM AEST
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Stealing the things that I can't live without....very powerful moving poem, leaving you with the tragedy of feeling nothing

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