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Array ( [sid] => 110336 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead forever [time] => 2005-11-24 21:49:48 [hometext] => At the first read this may not seem a suicidal writing but if you try to feel the mixed raw emotions there you'll most probaly agree with me that this is a true suicidal poem. [bodytext] => When will come my turn to die?
I want it now , far from here to fly.
At my grave don't shed a tear , don't cry
Be brave , stand tall , look high...
Never be sad 'bout my passing away
I'll be there for you , in dreams , if i may,
Remember me in the darkest of hours
Remember us when the world used to be ours.
No!Don't think of me!Forget me!
In my suffering Hell let me be
Forget about the past we had together,
I'm too dead now . dead forever [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 36 [informant] => deathbringer [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dead forever

Contributed by deathbringer on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 09:49:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

When will come my turn to die?
I want it now , far from here to fly.
At my grave don't shed a tear , don't cry
Be brave , stand tall , look high...
Never be sad 'bout my passing away
I'll be there for you , in dreams , if i may,
Remember me in the darkest of hours
Remember us when the world used to be ours.
No!Don't think of me!Forget me!
In my suffering Hell let me be
Forget about the past we had together,
I'm too dead now . dead forever

Copyright © deathbringer ... [ 2005-11-24 21:49:48]
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Re: Dead forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Zanobia on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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no, that seemed very suicidal to me. well it was really strong and brought me through the pain and suffring. wow. i dont know what else to say. thank you

Re: Dead forever (User Rating: 1 )
by pondering_poetess on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:16:03 PM AEST
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Definitely raw emotion. It brings the reader through the pain and suffering of the writer. However, I did not feel it was suicidal so much as regretful and filled with a new and blinding pain.

Re: Dead forever (User Rating: 1 )
by deathbringer on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:21:26 PM AEST
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All i can do as a writer is to make the reader feel my emotions , make him/her feel all the pain in my head . If I can't make the reader feel my emotions it means i'm not a good writer but I really don't care.Everybody makes it what they think of it.

Re: Dead forever (User Rating: 1 )
by pondering_poetess on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:34:30 PM AEST
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I didn't mean it as an insult in any way. I meant that it is a great write because of the fact that your words do bring the depth of the emotion to the reader. It takes a great deal of courage to express your inner thoughts. I admire that courage.

Re: Dead forever (User Rating: 1 )
by deathbringer on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:00:27 PM AEST
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courage???funny ....i always thought that courage is fear with different clothing but that's not the reason i wrote this poem or any other.I wrote it becouse i just don't care anymore.I've been thru lots in my life and it's not worth to b afraid to express yourself.And i wasn't offended.thanx for the review.

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