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The soul walker with many words retreat
Many like me have shared the same way
Yet we only sit back and watch the day
Busy now you all are
Going places the world awaits
So much change in a world of many
Yet for them a sigh a plenty
The lonley man a place so old
Many times those a few have stole
We just sit back and anticipate
Whatch you flying on a life of create
Look at him who sits and looks away
Remember those who had their day
Never forget in many lives of pure edge
There are those sitting lost
In a world of only empty
The lonley man
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I am the lonely man

Contributed by mindset on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 05:11:57 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Who am I the stranger of the street
The soul walker with many words retreat
Many like me have shared the same way
Yet we only sit back and watch the day
Busy now you all are
Going places the world awaits
So much change in a world of many
Yet for them a sigh a plenty
The lonley man a place so old
Many times those a few have stole
We just sit back and anticipate
Whatch you flying on a life of create
Look at him who sits and looks away
Remember those who had their day
Never forget in many lives of pure edge
There are those sitting lost
In a world of only empty
The lonley man

Copyright © mindset ... [ 2005-11-24 17:11:57]
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Re: I am the lonely man (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 06:37:02 PM AEST
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Wow, this poem really made me think about those less fortunate. Good write! I noticed some errors though, in the first line you use a lower case 'I' when referring to your self and 'whatch' should be spelt 'watch'. Asides from that, well done and thank you for sharing your poem. Cheers.

Re: I am the lonely man (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 07:03:54 PM AEST
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thank you

Re: I am the lonely man (User Rating: 1 )
by pondering_poetess on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 08:49:35 PM AEST
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You did an awesome job of giving voice to those who are the forgotten ones. The shadows that dance around the peripheral vision of society. Very nicely expressed and deeply touching in all its truth.

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