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Array ( [sid] => 110324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A mountain to high [time] => 2005-11-24 16:56:47 [hometext] => Falling back down [bodytext] => Every day i look upward and see no sky
Deep inside so many questions why
Looked inward no answers there
Looked at the world to only set me free
Played all my cards in this loosing game
Tryed to change that it is
Yet it all remains nothing only same
I look upwards now too tired to climb
Feel that i am slipping yet my soul wont fall down
What was as then my security
Breaks away shy from this day
I know it's me and all that i became
I see all around me tired and constant frown
I reach out for them to understand my pain
Yet i know it is i who has to remain unchanged
I dont know where i go from here
No rain falls anymore no release no tear
Every day inside becomes a real
That the end will never come

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 75 [informant] => mindset [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

A mountain to high

Contributed by mindset on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 04:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Every day i look upward and see no sky
Deep inside so many questions why
Looked inward no answers there
Looked at the world to only set me free
Played all my cards in this loosing game
Tryed to change that it is
Yet it all remains nothing only same
I look upwards now too tired to climb
Feel that i am slipping yet my soul wont fall down
What was as then my security
Breaks away shy from this day
I know it's me and all that i became
I see all around me tired and constant frown
I reach out for them to understand my pain
Yet i know it is i who has to remain unchanged
I dont know where i go from here
No rain falls anymore no release no tear
Every day inside becomes a real
That the end will never come

Copyright © mindset ... [ 2005-11-24 16:56:47]
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Re: A mountain to high (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:15:30 PM AEST
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As I feel it, your mountain is your soul. What you see with your eyes is not how your soul sees. So yes, it tends to become confused for it does not truly belong here.. its home is with the creator.. and the end will never come.. because your soul.. your mountain is eternal love...forever and ever, amen. So, questions and answers here do not have to be settled.. because in your soul.. is where it is all at.. Keep looking in where everything is complete.. your mountain that is so high, that only souls know the top of its peak.. and that peak goes higher and higher, there is no end... its all love..

raquelLeah

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