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Array ( [sid] => 11029 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fairy Tale in Green [time] => 2003-01-23 11:20:00 [hometext] => Not sure who this is about, probably havent meet her yet. More of a empathetic poem about a girl who lost her way. [bodytext] => Twenty Miles of Defeat behind you,
blinding you to the road ahead.
Where is that girl, that once lived inside you?
Dancing, and Singing, and dreaming in red.
The prision within you, the killer of fate
Has taken this girl, and taught her to hate.
Told her these stories, and made it seem fact
Told her of sorrow, an a world turning black.
I know you can hear her, for she can hear you,
She's calling your name, as your calling her's too.
Tell her you miss her, show her you there,
Tell her you'll save her, show her you care.
The sun will rise, the moon will fall
But if you never look, you'll never know at all.
Your eyes will lie, things are never what they seem,
Never say goodbye, to the fairy tale in Green.
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Fairy Tale in Green

Contributed by NeverKillADream on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Twenty Miles of Defeat behind you,
blinding you to the road ahead.
Where is that girl, that once lived inside you?
Dancing, and Singing, and dreaming in red.
The prision within you, the killer of fate
Has taken this girl, and taught her to hate.
Told her these stories, and made it seem fact
Told her of sorrow, an a world turning black.
I know you can hear her, for she can hear you,
She's calling your name, as your calling her's too.
Tell her you miss her, show her you there,
Tell her you'll save her, show her you care.
The sun will rise, the moon will fall
But if you never look, you'll never know at all.
Your eyes will lie, things are never what they seem,
Never say goodbye, to the fairy tale in Green.

Copyright © NeverKillADream ... [ 2003-01-23 11:20:00]
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Re: Fairy Tale in Green (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:19:10 PM AEST
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this is intense..it's good..i like it

Re: Fairy Tale in Green (User Rating: 1 )
by LayDownPlayDead on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:20:23 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really good. I like this one alot. This such a beautiful poem a so true. I love it. Great write!

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