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Array ( [sid] => 11026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fake [time] => 2003-01-23 11:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you smile at me as if were friends like from beingng to end thick and thin
you talk behind my bac as if your any better
but dont worry i dont care so whatever
i dont care about ur critisism on the color of my hair
on my outfits and weight if you dont like it dont stare
you take me as if im some kind of fool, dont talk to me if im not liked
this is how i am my attitude is my personality im not trying to be cool
you think of me in ways as if you dont even look. i dont want your opionons if its all bad with no good
a blind person can see way beyond some ways outside apperance, but then a person who can see cant get past it
many things about you stick out and annoy me but i dont say a word when i hardly see you and u have in 5 mintues time said plenty
i dont want your love or fake smiles
i dont want your hi and byes if its only to get around
u dont like me dont talk
dont look my way cuz your phoniess is too much to handle today [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 16 [informant] => tinyone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Fake

Contributed by tinyone on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



you smile at me as if were friends like from beingng to end thick and thin
you talk behind my bac as if your any better
but dont worry i dont care so whatever
i dont care about ur critisism on the color of my hair
on my outfits and weight if you dont like it dont stare
you take me as if im some kind of fool, dont talk to me if im not liked
this is how i am my attitude is my personality im not trying to be cool
you think of me in ways as if you dont even look. i dont want your opionons if its all bad with no good
a blind person can see way beyond some ways outside apperance, but then a person who can see cant get past it
many things about you stick out and annoy me but i dont say a word when i hardly see you and u have in 5 mintues time said plenty
i dont want your love or fake smiles
i dont want your hi and byes if its only to get around
u dont like me dont talk
dont look my way cuz your phoniess is too much to handle today




Copyright © tinyone ... [ 2003-01-23 11:00:00]
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Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:00:34 AM AEST
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Angie,
try to forgive those who don't have time or a nice word to say. It is them that have a problem and will be at a loss for not nowing someone like you who from this excellent, door slamming piece is obviously a person who cares.
I like this one also, your poems have good styles.

With love
Dean;-)




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