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Array ( [sid] => 110245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving You. [time] => 2005-11-23 11:02:38 [hometext] => Its hard when you love some one and they dont love you. [bodytext] => I want to hold you, stroke you face ,
hold you in a warm embrace,
all the time I think of you,
imagine the things we could do.

I think of you and say your name,
but youv'e never felt the same,
you make me laugh, you make me cry,
but inside you make me die.

What is it I have to do,
to make you love me how I love you,
I would do anything you ask,
pleaseing you would be my task.

So I ask you one more time,
is there any chance you are mine,
I know the answer before you say,
but it helps me dream another day..

I sit with tears running down my face,
no one will ever take your place,
I know that I must move on,
why was loving you so very wrong.. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Loving You.

Contributed by lillyjane on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:02:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I want to hold you, stroke you face ,
hold you in a warm embrace,
all the time I think of you,
imagine the things we could do.

I think of you and say your name,
but youv'e never felt the same,
you make me laugh, you make me cry,
but inside you make me die.

What is it I have to do,
to make you love me how I love you,
I would do anything you ask,
pleaseing you would be my task.

So I ask you one more time,
is there any chance you are mine,
I know the answer before you say,
but it helps me dream another day..

I sit with tears running down my face,
no one will ever take your place,
I know that I must move on,
why was loving you so very wrong..

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2005-11-23 11:02:38]
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Re: Loving You. (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:19:14 AM AEST
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very well done, this is a good poem, it has good flow and decent word useage, but if u want a truly great poem try useing some descriptive writeing and spice it up a bit.

just my 2 cents

SM

Re: Loving You. (User Rating: 1 )
by shortcut on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:32:18 AM AEST
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Unreturned love is so incredibly painful and very well put into words by you.
Nice writing.

Re: Loving You. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 07:48:35 PM AEST
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Someone somewhere loves you Lillyjane, just hang on in there, anyone who can write as good as this deserves the best. xxx

Re: Loving You. (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:26:14 PM AEST
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My goodness, anyone who loves like this should be loved back with all of someones heart.
Keep writing, you're an excellent poet.

Re: Loving You. (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 06:55:13 AM AEST
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wow, from the heart! its lovely

Re: Loving You. (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 08:52:48 PM AEST
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I think everyone has felt the pain of loving and not being loved back. But in an odd way I also pity the person loved by many for they cannot love them all and someone must be hurt, and a lot of the times it hurts the loved as well as the loving.

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