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[aid] => mick
[title] => Light of My Life
[time] => 2005-11-23 06:41:16
[hometext] => I wrote this for my wife and she really liked it but i wanted to see what you guys thought. I'll be back from Iraq in just about 50 days....Steve
[bodytext] => Light in the darkness for ever so bright
Light in the darkness light up my life
Touch me hold me feel me tonight
Show me your love and make things alright
I need you to come to come guide my way
To steady my breath as I run through each day
Looking for you as I reach through the night
The light of your love that lights up my life
In my existence darkness once dwelt
But you as my love you saved me from hell
You lifted me high on the light of your love
Emotions come as my memories flood
An essence of you my one and only true wish
In my memories mind were I feel your sweet bliss
Soon you will be mine and are lights will be one
Ever so stronger when we join hands as one
~Steve~
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[counter] => 246
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[informant] => sride686
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LovePoetry
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Light of My Life
Contributed by
sride686
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:41:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Light in the darkness for ever so bright
Light in the darkness light up my life
Touch me hold me feel me tonight
Show me your love and make things alright
I need you to come to come guide my way
To steady my breath as I run through each day
Looking for you as I reach through the night
The light of your love that lights up my life
In my existence darkness once dwelt
But you as my love you saved me from hell
You lifted me high on the light of your love
Emotions come as my memories flood
An essence of you my one and only true wish
In my memories mind were I feel your sweet bliss
Soon you will be mine and are lights will be one
Ever so stronger when we join hands as one
~Steve~
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sride686
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2005-11-23 06:41:16]
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Re: Light of My Life
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 07:19:54 AM AEST
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...I'm at a loss for words...they all sound so cheap...and I'm just a stranger...your wife must have melted into a puddle...
...thanks for sharing it...and, keep your head down...real low...maybe even crawl...
ron...enigma |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:08:42 AM AEST
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| Great Job my man, be safe and kick some you know what. (rated G so no one gets mad) |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:12:58 AM AEST
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Steve you write such sweet sentiments to your wife, im not supprised if she cried over this. It's thats beautiful.
Keep up the wonderful poetry.
Jane~ |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:13:33 AM AEST
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Steve you write such sweet sentiments to your wife, im not supprised if she cried over this. It's thats beautiful.
Keep up the wonderful poetry.
Jane~ |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by shortcut on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:03:26 AM AEST
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| Been there- Iraq- home now- you'll get here, so glad you didn't lose sight of whats important and keep the home love burning, I saw so many who lost that vision and strayed. You're wife should be proud knowing you serve and you love her so very much- stay safe and thank you for both your contribution of the beautiful poem but your contribution in Iraq as well. Shortcut. |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:28:02 AM AEST
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keep heart my man, your doing a good thing, but we dont want such a good poet as u getting shot :P so like the others said keep low....very low, be safe and ill pray for your safe return.
SM |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 03:59:27 PM AEST
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| I am just so thankful we have computers so that loved ones can get mail to them faster, to correspond back and forth and not have to wait for some horse to carry it to you. 50 days.... Dear Lord, make these 50 days go by quickly so that this family can be together, I say this in your name Jesus.. Amen. Raquel Leah |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:20:44 PM AEST
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As you know I did melt into a puddle when I read this and I did cry. The words in this poem just make me feel how loved I am. I in awe of the way your portray your love for me, and of the way you see me as someone who can steady your breath and make you feel safe and loved. I am going to cry now just reading it again. Everytime I read it I see something more in it that I love. I am glad that I can be your light in the darkness. I love you with all of my heart. Thank you so much for the beautiful poem...I can't tell you enough how much I love it! Kisses my love,
Your Lea-Ann |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:21:29 PM AEST
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| YAY YAY YAY!!! 50 days! But whose counting?? LOL. ;) I LOVE YOU!! |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by deathbringer on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:20:19 AM AEST
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| Words are not enough to describe you love to someone yet you got as close as humanly possible.Excelent work. |
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Re: Light of My Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:11:37 AM AEST
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awsome piece of writing steve.
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