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Array ( [sid] => 110233 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Evil You Are [time] => 2005-11-23 03:06:39 [hometext] => Just out htere took me a while to decide to post it [bodytext] => I hate you
look what you did to me
My world jusrt fine
Until that one moment in time

Where you came into my life
You turned things around
My life now forever changed
And no way to ever be the same

You took my heart, cold and empty
Revived my heart and healed my soul
I wondered and thought could it be love
Could you be the one sent from above

NO, NOW I SEE
The evil you truly are
I swore to never let it happen
To change into another person was to unfathem

Now my heart completely dull
More cold and empty than ever before
Knowing that i am being altered
In your presence my feelings falter

How could i let you get so close
My mind was different around you
I cannot let this happen again
I cant even keep you as a friend

So i end this madness
Here and now
I'm sorry i let you down
I started to change and you started to frown

I wanted you so bad
I wanted you to stay
Even though your so young
I wanted to take the breath from your lung

To be with you one star lit night
Me and you alone
So we could be together
And that moment would last forever

Now i can see
That you were a dream
And dreams are for the week
Something unreachable we seek

And if by chance the dream comes true
Then the adventure no longer exist
I didnt want to add you in
As a dream forever forbiden

For you like me now
But you do not know
The dark one that no longer hides
The one you dont see, My other side

Even now my heart still longs for your touch
To fill me back up with joy
And right now i will fight
For what i know to be right

Me and you,and maybe not forever
But just right now,for this short time.
to see you smile and happy

Romance Pyro [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => romance_pyro [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Evil You Are

Contributed by romance_pyro on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 03:06:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I hate you
look what you did to me
My world jusrt fine
Until that one moment in time

Where you came into my life
You turned things around
My life now forever changed
And no way to ever be the same

You took my heart, cold and empty
Revived my heart and healed my soul
I wondered and thought could it be love
Could you be the one sent from above

NO, NOW I SEE
The evil you truly are
I swore to never let it happen
To change into another person was to unfathem

Now my heart completely dull
More cold and empty than ever before
Knowing that i am being altered
In your presence my feelings falter

How could i let you get so close
My mind was different around you
I cannot let this happen again
I cant even keep you as a friend

So i end this madness
Here and now
I'm sorry i let you down
I started to change and you started to frown

I wanted you so bad
I wanted you to stay
Even though your so young
I wanted to take the breath from your lung

To be with you one star lit night
Me and you alone
So we could be together
And that moment would last forever

Now i can see
That you were a dream
And dreams are for the week
Something unreachable we seek

And if by chance the dream comes true
Then the adventure no longer exist
I didnt want to add you in
As a dream forever forbiden

For you like me now
But you do not know
The dark one that no longer hides
The one you dont see, My other side

Even now my heart still longs for your touch
To fill me back up with joy
And right now i will fight
For what i know to be right

Me and you,and maybe not forever
But just right now,for this short time.
to see you smile and happy

Romance Pyro




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Re: The Evil You Are (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 08:51:17 AM AEST
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holy ***** i cant believe this is wow such great poem loved t it was talking bout me i know but what io choose is not your fault so dont worry bout anything i doing luv yah laters




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