Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:54:40 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 110201 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => New Poem [time] => 2005-11-22 19:02:05 [hometext] => just fyi 'chill' in the sense that I use it is meant to mean 'mellow' and I find myself describing myself/ being desribed that way quite often lately. I chose the 'secrets' topic b/c this is kind of one of those 'things I wish I could tell you' [bodytext] =>
Come and kiss me where a warm wind
Plays across my skin and slips
Into my heart that skips in turn
Cause I can control the blue of my eyes
But only you can care to notice
And you notice and it takes my surprise

If you have them, don’t let me see
Your uneasiness, the nerves
Inside your words and deeds
Cause I’m so fragile and so chill
But I can’t be chill any longer
Than a nervous heart’s weak will

Just go slow and let it all relax
So I’m not rushed or scared
By what I’ve dared to do
The way I’ve moved on so readily
And I know I’ll get jumpy
But if I’m jumpy, please help steady me

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 571 [topic] => 71 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

New Poem

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 07:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Come and kiss me where a warm wind
Plays across my skin and slips
Into my heart that skips in turn
Cause I can control the blue of my eyes
But only you can care to notice
And you notice and it takes my surprise

If you have them, don’t let me see
Your uneasiness, the nerves
Inside your words and deeds
Cause I’m so fragile and so chill
But I can’t be chill any longer
Than a nervous heart’s weak will

Just go slow and let it all relax
So I’m not rushed or scared
By what I’ve dared to do
The way I’ve moved on so readily
And I know I’ll get jumpy
But if I’m jumpy, please help steady me

Copyright Â© liquidsunshine ... [ 2005-11-22 19:02:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: New Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:30:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow that's a really cool play you've made on words. and in a way i can totally relate...awesome job.

Re: New Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:43:10 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

It's good to see you writing again Chels. This was such a "mellow" write. It's simple and yet it brings you so much.

Lovely write.

Jane~

Re: New Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:41:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

It's sweet, calm, I'm not sure how to explain it. It's a poem that one would read to their loved one in the park on a sunny day. Well, that;s how my mind saw it.
Well done, friend.
Take care.
David

Re: New Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:13:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

nice poem you should check out outlaw_mutiny youd like his work

Re: New Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

nice poem i wish i could write like that

Re: New Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by lifefliesby on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:14:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

amazing wirte. made me remember times I had w/ someone special. great times. not only times I'll never forget but that show no signs of ever fading from my memories.
great write chels. keep it up.

love,
Jared J

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com