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I didnt burn that house the devil made me do it.

The devil made me beat the old folks up.

Im sick and tired listening to the devil.

Maybe i should kill the devil.

Well there i go i just killed the devil.

The devil made me do it, the devil made me do it.

Wait the devils dead guess he didnt make me do it,

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THE DEVIL

Contributed by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:19:34 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

The devil made me do it. the devil made me do it.

I didnt burn that house the devil made me do it.

The devil made me beat the old folks up.

Im sick and tired listening to the devil.

Maybe i should kill the devil.

Well there i go i just killed the devil.

The devil made me do it, the devil made me do it.

Wait the devils dead guess he didnt make me do it,

Guess i did it cause it was fun

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Re: THE DEVIL (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:51:19 PM AEST
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Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha! I liked it. Very simple message, and so universal. I like its simplicity and it's ending. [ I guess I did it 'cause it's fun ]. The only thing I can think of is to be a little more formal ... 'cause vs. because. But perhaps you did that to show the elasicity of the message. Good job!

Re: THE DEVIL (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:06:00 PM AEST
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With the repetition, it would make a decent song if it was expanded...The ending was good for a laugh, but this would be better if the content wasn't so slim. Keep up the writes!

Scorp.

Re: THE DEVIL (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:34:02 PM AEST
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nice poem! ... guess I did it cause it was fun.

This poem was kind of funny ... hahahaha

Re: THE DEVIL (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:57:37 PM AEST
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realy a good write. what kind of stuff have you been having cencored

Re: THE DEVIL (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:42:00 AM AEST
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Well put I think the devil is full of you know what....

Lets kill the devillll...

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