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[aid] => mick
[title] => Depressed,
[time] => 2005-11-22 05:03:16
[hometext] => my poem called depressed!!! HELP I SUFFER WITH DEPRESSION.This is short!! probably doesnt make any sense ... read it and tell me what you think!!
[bodytext] => When I wake up I feel so sad.
I feel so unblessed.
I dont want to get undressed.
I feel so unrest.
I dont feel like begin a Guest.
I lay my head on the armrest.
I expressed this cause I am sad.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 332
[topic] => 21
[informant] => Butterflygirl40
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[score] => 30
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
)
Depressed,
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Butterflygirl40
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:03:16 AM in AEST
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When I wake up I feel so sad.
I feel so unblessed.
I dont want to get undressed.
I feel so unrest.
I dont feel like begin a Guest.
I lay my head on the armrest.
I expressed this cause I am sad.
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Re: Depressed,
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:44:28 AM AEST
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Hey chin up sweet girl. I know of all the down falls of depression for I suffer from it too.
It's good to put pen to paper and to write on how u feel. You'll find that it'll help. You need someone to talk to please pm me ok.
*heartfelt hugs for you from me*
~sue~ |
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Re: Depressed,
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:44:34 AM AEST
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hey i told you this didnt make any sense
lol ... but at least you could comment me on this..
to let me know if you like it are not//
I always have to comment myself!!! |
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Re: Depressed,
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 06:28:12 AM AEST
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...I am an admirer of authenticity...poetry that uses written words, not written words that use poetry...as you write, technique and political correctness will likely follow, but the important thing is that you express your heart, soul and spirit without reserve...you do that pretty well, so, in my rather small world where I rule, you would be considered a good poet.
...your poem sounded so much like me when I was a kid...I suffered from severe depression from childhood up until last year...get help...there is help...my chemistry was off...really off...I am presently taking the highest dose of the antidepressant, Effexor, plus the attention deficit medication, Concerta...night and day...I also saw a counselor umpteen hundred times...
...if life isn't fun...do something about it and don't quit until life is fun...don't wait until you're fifty-three years old, like me...
...good luck and thanks for sharing your spirit...
ron...enigma |
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Re: Depressed,
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 06:36:47 AM AEST
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sorry to hear u r depressed
hope u snap out of it
it is a very good poem |
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Re: Depressed,
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:19:33 AM AEST
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Aw, so sad. Sorry to hear you're depressed. However, it is a very nice poem. Nicely written. So few words can say so much.
Thank s for sharing and take care.
Tim
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Re: Depressed,
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:06:24 AM AEST
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nicely done...a short poem with so much meaning. i was like you once sad all the time never wanting to get out off bed but i do because i have a person who makes me feel wonderful bout myself...find one they'll help and then you can be happy like me..im not trying to tell you what to do but im saying it helps alot. i hope you get better and i hope good things come your way
peace and love
meghann
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Re: Depressed,
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by Nickibabe421 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:09:51 PM AEST
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Good Poem. I have been suffering from depression for over 6 years and I know it is VERY difficult to deal with. I feel poetry is one of the best ways to express yourself when you think no one is listening. I have writtin many poems like this one when I feel down. Don't worry, some how and some way it does get better. You may not think so but it will, just believe in yourself that you can get better. Plus the first step is admitting you have a problem and you have so your one step closer than I was.
Hang in there...
Nicki |
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Re: Depressed,
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:49:24 PM AEST
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| An interesting poem. The 5th line doesn't make sense to me, like it was put there for the sake of rhyming, which is a shame because this is a good poem otherwise. I also suffer from depression and you have described it well. There IS hope. Seek help, there are several different options, like therapy, medication or alternatives such as herbal remedies and aromatherapy. I also want to invite you to PM me if you ever need to talk with some one. A problem shared is a problem halved they say and if I can help I would like to. When you are stuck in depression it is easy to feel alone, you are not alone. **HUGS** , Jenny. |
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Re: Depressed,
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 12:56:36 AM AEST
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I see your soul throught this 4get it's a poem it some one reaching out who's sad lonely and in pain, and yet your effort in creating this poem is a beautiful one, touched me in a way that shows u r still an artist, struggling yes, but an artist never the less, nice peice of work.
Ben |
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Re: Depressed,
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:20:28 PM AEST
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| ahh we have all been here once or twice. i like your wording, the way it flows. good job on this write. try to make it through, and i hope it gets better for ya! |
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Re: Depressed,
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:15:03 AM AEST
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Oh sweetheart I just came out of a giant depression. May your heart be filled with the spirit. If you message me, I can give you some poems I have discovered that helped me get well, wonderful writers that care here at YPDC. It is my turn in giving back what others gave to me here on this site, all love and healing.
From my little book, Apples of Gold by C.R.Gibson
Those who have suffered much are like those who know many languages; they have learned to understand all and to be understood by all
Telling your troubles always helps. The world'd dumb indifference makes you mad enough to keep on fighting...
All problems become smaller if you don't dodge them but confront them. Touch a thistle timidly and it will prick you; grasp it boldly and its spines crumble.
Bless you dearest one...
Here is a quote from me to you...
I am an unknown author, but my words are not unknown... Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Depressed,
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by Sinned on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 06:35:44 AM AEST
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butterflygirl40
WOW !!!
Your feelings jumped off he page.
Icould feel your sadness.
The ryming is very good except for the last line.
I think you should have ended something like this.
"Because I am so sad I had to express"
Other than the last line it is pefect. :)
When you write you help others and that may help
you feel happier.
This is a sad poem,but I still had to smile
because of it.
sinned |
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