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Array ( [sid] => 110158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look [time] => 2005-11-21 19:54:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look in my eyes
What do you see?
A little soul?
Longing to be free?

Look at my arms
Do you see them now?
Here I am told
That the scars are so foul

Look at my mouth
What is it saying?
"Please help me"
"My life is decaying"

Look at my hands
What are they doing?
They are cutting me up
But no one they are fooling

Look at my tears
Where did they infest
This is my last word
For this is my death [comments] => 4 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 61 [informant] => tacit_pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Look

Contributed by tacit_pain on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Look in my eyes
What do you see?
A little soul?
Longing to be free?

Look at my arms
Do you see them now?
Here I am told
That the scars are so foul

Look at my mouth
What is it saying?
"Please help me"
"My life is decaying"

Look at my hands
What are they doing?
They are cutting me up
But no one they are fooling

Look at my tears
Where did they infest
This is my last word
For this is my death

Copyright © tacit_pain ... [ 2005-11-21 19:54:10]
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Re: Look (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:17:09 AM AEST
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wow.this is so powerful. i hope you dont feel this way, if so please try and be strong.
beautiful writing.
~keep the faith~
bec

Re: Look (User Rating: 1 )
by mindless-wish on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:19:24 AM AEST
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hey
awesome poem it told me alot. i know its not easy but you'll get through this.

Re: Look (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:34:04 AM AEST
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hey awsome poem! I am sorry you're going

threw this.. I know how you feel I suffer from

depression,, and it has it's up's and downs.

thanks for sharing it,,, and if you're feeling like

this ... I hope you get better.

Re: Look (User Rating: 1 )
by fake_emptyness on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 07:45:13 PM AEST
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i like this one. only because i know how to (look) at you....i know what (I) see.

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