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Array ( [sid] => 110150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can I Let Go? [time] => 2005-11-21 17:25:57 [hometext] => I'm torn between love and beginning my future.....I want to get my life to where I want it to be, but without her what is there?? comments always appreciated :) [bodytext] => If I were to let go of you,
and try and get rid of all this pain.
Would I be able to make it through?
Could I somehow break this chain?

My heart has been yours for years,
and deep down it always will be.
You've caused a countless number of tears,
but still you set my soul free.

I can't do this anymore,
things just didn't go our way.
I love you just as much as before,
but everything has just gone astray.

If there was some way to fix this,
I'd give anything to know how.
Being with you is what I truely miss,
but I think I have to go now.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 52 [informant] => curtisc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Can I Let Go?

Contributed by curtisc on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 05:25:57 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

If I were to let go of you,
and try and get rid of all this pain.
Would I be able to make it through?
Could I somehow break this chain?

My heart has been yours for years,
and deep down it always will be.
You've caused a countless number of tears,
but still you set my soul free.

I can't do this anymore,
things just didn't go our way.
I love you just as much as before,
but everything has just gone astray.

If there was some way to fix this,
I'd give anything to know how.
Being with you is what I truely miss,
but I think I have to go now.

Copyright © curtisc ... [ 2005-11-21 17:25:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can I Let Go? (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 05:43:46 PM AEST
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Curtis a sad heart breaking write that brings tears to fill ones eyes. A very well expressed and written piece of poetry.

If there was some way to fix this,
I'd give anything to know how.
Being with you is what I truely miss,
but I think I have to go now.

I wish you all the best Curtis. If it is meant to be things will work themselves out. My heart goes out to u.
May ur days ahead be filled with love, joy and happiness. Goodluck and the very best to u and ur girl.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: Can I Let Go? (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:52:46 PM AEST
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That's right sweetie....GO...start ur "new" life...whenever that may be. Everything always work out! xoxo Tanya

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