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Array ( [sid] => 110098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Secret Glass Roses [time] => 2005-11-20 21:37:11 [hometext] => Only to be found in my adventures that love is blind....by: trini [bodytext] => .A shattered glass arrangement
.Of blackened lifeless roses
.Left to pick up the blood stained shards
.Of promises you smashed apart

.A tribute to out love you said
.As you walked away with her
.Myself, a girl of life and lust
.A drink for an erotic feeling I was

.Left to hang in my demise
.Under a bridge made of cold stone
.No warmth to fill the open wound
.Cuts made and will be deeper soon

.Cars drown out my anguished cries
.As memories shift the painted walls
.The paint told truthful stories unseen,
.The imprint was made but what did it mean?

.Recoiled in remorse, I realize
.As my fingers begin to numb an iced dull grey
.And warm tears slowly begin to fade
.Because, these are my secrets that I have made.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => trini [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Secret Glass Roses

Contributed by trini on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 09:37:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

.A shattered glass arrangement
.Of blackened lifeless roses
.Left to pick up the blood stained shards
.Of promises you smashed apart

.A tribute to out love you said
.As you walked away with her
.Myself, a girl of life and lust
.A drink for an erotic feeling I was

.Left to hang in my demise
.Under a bridge made of cold stone
.No warmth to fill the open wound
.Cuts made and will be deeper soon

.Cars drown out my anguished cries
.As memories shift the painted walls
.The paint told truthful stories unseen,
.The imprint was made but what did it mean?

.Recoiled in remorse, I realize
.As my fingers begin to numb an iced dull grey
.And warm tears slowly begin to fade
.Because, these are my secrets that I have made.

Copyright © trini ... [ 2005-11-20 21:37:11]
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Re: Secret Glass Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:15:27 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery and such a sad scenario. love and relationships have a ton of hard lessons to be learned. the key is to not regret and take what you've learned in order to strive to be better in the future. best wishes and good luck.

Re: Secret Glass Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:36:29 PM AEST
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A sad and very emotional write. You leave the reader feeling ur pain and suffering. A captivating, deep and very well written piece of poetry. Time heals all wounds. Chin up and may u find someone out there who is worthy of ur love.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~

Re: Secret Glass Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:38:05 AM AEST
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This was a very sad poem!!!

Re: Secret Glass Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:10:50 PM AEST
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Wow, left me in awe, very catching title and great imagry. nicely done

Re: Secret Glass Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:22:17 PM AEST
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a sad write but very well written, keep em coming,,,Eddy

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