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[title] => Mystifying Treasures
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[hometext] => how materlistic objects can take ....away
[bodytext] => Treasures, to the naked eye that we sometimes do not see
Can be for ever treasured, if we only make time for “the you and me”
Riches and diamonds, can buy some potentials fakes love
With that: Are the words that flow, only as bogus as the modernism needed
If one can be bought, and not take what is real
What you have isn’t love or a treasure
It’s more like a shiny object taken from another
Given to one with presumptions, of deceit
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Mystifying Treasures
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brew
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Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:00:59 PM in AEST
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Treasures, to the naked eye that we sometimes do not see
Can be for ever treasured, if we only make time for “the you and me”
Riches and diamonds, can buy some potentials fakes love
With that: Are the words that flow, only as bogus as the modernism needed
If one can be bought, and not take what is real
What you have isn’t love or a treasure
It’s more like a shiny object taken from another
Given to one with presumptions, of deceit
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brew
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:56:30 PM AEST
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How very true! I love it Brew, great write!
Thank you for sharing,
Tim
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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Dayna how very true my dear friend. A short, but straight to the point poem. I like your style of writing Dayna. You can always produce a great write time and time again.
Given to one with presumptions, of deceit
A great piece of writing by a very talented and gifted Miss. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:53:41 PM AEST
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A very strong take Dayna and expressed in a way that only you
can. :~) You are right, of course. Treasures of the heart, methinks,
are the greatest of all. Well done!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by remote on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:40:43 AM AEST
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Hi there, just saying hello!
-J |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:35:13 AM AEST
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A preponderance of of wisdom 2 equal a
conclussion of thruth, a most significant
and thought prevoking poem u have here
brew, nicely done, like your style.
((((brew))))) |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:37:09 AM AEST
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Re: Mystifying Treasures (User Rating: 1)
by BenPapa on Monday, November 21 2005 @ 10:35:13 CST
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A preponderance of of wisdom 2 equal a
conclussion of thruth, a most significant
and thought prevoking poem u have here
brew, nicely done, like your style.
((((brew))))
Ben
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:43:32 AM AEST
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A short yet wonderful write.
I love the simpleness of this all, thanks for sharing Brew.
Jane~ |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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Indeed. The best treasures can't be bought...Although some still choose to try to sell it...Nicely done with this straight up write.
Scorp. |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 02:12:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful first two lines Dayna. I understand the poem. Thank you. RL |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 08:17:03 PM AEST
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Still waters run deep Brew, and you are certainly a deep thinker........and observer. Have you noticed also how materialism has replaced for the joys we used to get from God. Like Love, Kindness, Goodness, etc.
This poem would make anyone think, and I agree with it wholeheartedly
Thank you for sharing it with me!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:08:05 PM AEST
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Great write as always Brew.
Jeff |
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Re: Mystifying Treasures
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:33:39 AM AEST
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ahhh if only everyone felt this way...sigh.
Great job on this!! |
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