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Array ( [sid] => 110026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tomorow, Just One More Go [time] => 2005-11-19 14:26:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So here I am again
Yahoo, Paltalk, Msn

Same people same trouble
Husband gone wife gone
So lonely
Find a friend, chat
Chat, lose a friend

I'll find a lifelong pal
Who will talk for just one day
People care, they really dont
Feeling good then feeling bad
Adding to your misery

Why come back? Why not?
So Sure that I Dont want to
Always Knowing that I will

The nics are mostly friendly
But are they being real?
Are they just pretending?
Some play their little game
Sad its all some have left

Talk to a screen for most the day
Then eat then sleep
Suffering for the mistakes made
How do they get warm feelings
For people they'll never know?

I think I'll give it up
But tomorrow, just one more go [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 43 [informant] => spoonhead [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Tomorow, Just One More Go

Contributed by spoonhead on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 02:26:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

So here I am again
Yahoo, Paltalk, Msn

Same people same trouble
Husband gone wife gone
So lonely
Find a friend, chat
Chat, lose a friend

I'll find a lifelong pal
Who will talk for just one day
People care, they really dont
Feeling good then feeling bad
Adding to your misery

Why come back? Why not?
So Sure that I Dont want to
Always Knowing that I will

The nics are mostly friendly
But are they being real?
Are they just pretending?
Some play their little game
Sad its all some have left

Talk to a screen for most the day
Then eat then sleep
Suffering for the mistakes made
How do they get warm feelings
For people they'll never know?

I think I'll give it up
But tomorrow, just one more go

Copyright © spoonhead ... [ 2005-11-19 14:26:10]
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Re: Tomorow, Just One More Go (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 02:47:04 PM AEST
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Chatrooms are always so fickle...never know what to expect. Most people in chat are as fake as the next door's plastic flowers. They look good, they feel good but inside, they are shallow. Shame really, cause chatrooms contain so many real life human beings.

Good first time poem tim, well done...

Huggsss,

Nats

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