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Array ( [sid] => 110005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => these things [time] => 2005-11-19 01:11:30 [hometext] => my first post. [ l o v e ] does wonders. [bodytext] => *Things like t h e s e ...
they cant be more real.
just let me watch you for a while
i want to feel.

things like t h e s e ...
they cant be fake
just sleep here for a while
and i will stay awake.

i'll catch your falls
if you'll catch mine..
in the center of four walls
intertwined.

let me steal your p a i n
i promise to remain.

fingers laced, and hearts locked
eyes in sight
and fear is lost..............

s t u n n i n g ...........

Ohh boy, Strum Away.......
and here is where my smile stays

in these days.

the sounds of your guitar
never let this get too far..

things like t h e s e ....
they must be a reality
just stay with me a while...

This Just cant be a F a L L a c Y *

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Johndoe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

these things

Contributed by Johndoe on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 01:11:30 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

*Things like t h e s e ...
they cant be more real.
just let me watch you for a while
i want to feel.

things like t h e s e ...
they cant be fake
just sleep here for a while
and i will stay awake.

i'll catch your falls
if you'll catch mine..
in the center of four walls
intertwined.

let me steal your p a i n
i promise to remain.

fingers laced, and hearts locked
eyes in sight
and fear is lost..............

s t u n n i n g ...........

Ohh boy, Strum Away.......
and here is where my smile stays

in these days.

the sounds of your guitar
never let this get too far..

things like t h e s e ....
they must be a reality
just stay with me a while...

This Just cant be a F a L L a c Y *

Copyright © Johndoe ... [ 2005-11-19 01:11:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: these things (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 03:11:37 AM AEST
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Well if this is your first one then can't wait for the next one.
U have incrediable talent.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: these things (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 01:51:26 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
*huggles you tight*

I loved this.
Some of the wording was wonderful,
and caught me completely off-guard.

Also, the spacing between letters of selected words
was a lovely touch, too.

Great work, keep writing!

~*Kaitlyn

Re: these things (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 04:35:47 AM AEST
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Welcom to YPDC I hope you enjoy it.

This is a very good first posting, I am looking forword to seeing what you will write next. you do have a wounderful talent please dont let it go to waist, read you later.

*H_S*

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