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A LIFE
Contributed by
OzChick
on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:23:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life begins.
I am born.
I am new.
Life is strange.
I’m in pain.
I’m not sure I like this.
I cry.
I die.
The end.
Copyright ©
OzChick
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2005-11-18 20:23:45]
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Re: A LIFE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 11:09:40 PM AEST
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| i see this as a borderline poem, and i think that axeing the 'i' perspective would make this power with some added words to make up for the lost concept. this is original and worth the time to read, because its not everyday one comes across such a life. |
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Re: A LIFE
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by andyp89057 on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 06:37:33 AM AEST
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| I like it. shows life in a nut shell.... |
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