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My Sacred Sound
Contributed by
Minus_Blindfold
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Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 06:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Take your place as I take the lead,
Create the sound so I may embrace the beat,
Pluck the hairs and hit the skin,
As I raise my hand for the voice within,
If you can provide the mood I can lend you my words,
My curse, through my eyes this is inferred,
Feeling consumed as I caress my passon and whisper a sigh,
Stretching my face as the vibe intensifies,
With an anguished voice and a searing heart,
Fused to the cord which numbs this art,
Eyes blurred with old visions that narate the stream,
Forming new words of emotions to scream,
With this deafening noise, adrenaline rushes to sustain my shreik,
And as the pain subsides and emerges as but a tear in my eye,
The echo remains silent...but is still alive.
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Minus_Blindfold
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2005-11-18 18:55:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Sacred Sound
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unbreakable on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:09:35 PM AEST (User
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This is a good write..I like your message. The rhyme scheme could use a little work, but it's pretty good. I like the title, fits the poem nicely. Well done...keep it up
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Re: My Sacred Sound
(User Rating: 1 ) by Desolated_Denial on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:47:58 PM AEST (User
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Kudos Dustin. :)
I like the last line about the [echo still being alive].
Muchos Muchos Good my friend. :D
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Re: My Sacred Sound
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:48:57 PM AEST (User
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This is an excellent and very well written piece of poetry. Very well expressed.
And as the pain subsides and emerges as but a tear in my eye,
The echo remains silent...but is still alive.
Remarkable. I absolutely enjoyed your write. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
*hugs*
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