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When all I can do is look at you.

You tell me goodbye .

But I do not buy your lies.

Your eyes tell me you are lying.

When you tell me goodbye.

Of all the tears I cry.Doesn't that mean enough.

I dont believe your goodbyes.

Because you have lied before.

I want a reason for the goodbyes.

When you stand before me with tears in your eyes.

Thats how I know you're lying.

I feel like dying inside .

Dont tell me goodbye If you dont mean it.

Of all the lies goodbyes and cries.

Isn't that enough of your goodbyes. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 48 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 01:08:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Where do we go from here.

When all I can do is look at you.

You tell me goodbye .

But I do not buy your lies.

Your eyes tell me you are lying.

When you tell me goodbye.

Of all the tears I cry.Doesn't that mean enough.

I dont believe your goodbyes.

Because you have lied before.

I want a reason for the goodbyes.

When you stand before me with tears in your eyes.

Thats how I know you're lying.

I feel like dying inside .

Dont tell me goodbye If you dont mean it.

Of all the lies goodbyes and cries.

Isn't that enough of your goodbyes.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2005-11-18 01:08:28]
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Re: WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE. (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 01:20:00 AM AEST
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when you read my poems .

please comment me cause I do it when

I read poems!!^_^

Re: WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 02:54:33 AM AEST
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I found this to be a bit repetitive.

Some of the imagery was pretty good though,
and I liked the message you were portraying.

Hearing a lot of 'goodbye's doesn't agree with me, either. O_o

Thanks for sharing this, and keep writing!

~KayT

Re: WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE. (User Rating: 1 )
by ShesAKillerQueen on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 03:05:03 AM AEST
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I agree with kay T, a tad bit repetetive, but still has great potential! Work on finding a different way of saying things...a way you dont think anyone will have ever heard before...for instance, try writing a simple sentence, and then re-writing it three or four times, in completely different words. *shrug* its always been a very useful excercise for me!

keep up the great work!

~Riin

Re: WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE. (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 07:54:59 AM AEST
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I totally agree with Kay -T and Riin on this one. Although with a bit of alteration this poem can go a long way for you. A great job otherwise. Keep penning. You'll see improvement each time you write a new poem. I would really like u to fix this up. You've got what it takes to be a writer. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE. (User Rating: 1 )
by LovesJester45 on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 07:05:05 PM AEST
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very nice poem and it says even more that it was off the top of your head. As i was reading i started remebering a couple of my own experiences and it was nice. very nice

Re: WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE. (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:17:50 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It read as though written fro your heart.

ES

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