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Death And Etc.
Contributed by
tacit_pain
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Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:28:44 PM in AEST
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I've always wondered
What it's like to die
To finally be happy
Or even to fly
To stand on a ledge
With a rope around my neck
Or have a gun to my head
To blow it to speaks
What would I think of
The last minute before taking my life
What would I use?
Would it be a knife?
What about after?
Would my body stay in the ground?
Would my soul wonder off?
Just to be found
Oh what would happen
If I were to die?
Would I finally be free?
To fly in the sky?
Copyright ©
tacit_pain
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2005-11-17 19:28:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Death And Etc.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:33:09 PM AEST (User
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I think most people think about it, what it's like, their last thoughts, words etc. Very nice write.
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Re: Death And Etc.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Zanobia on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:41:38 PM AEST (User
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wow. i had though about what it would be like to die, and when my grandmother died, though i wasnt there, my aunt siad that when she took her last breath, it was like she saw heaven and god. because she smiled and looked happy, then died. i cried. but yes i have wonderd these things before. and i think your poem did a good job explaining what it is like, to wonder. great job!
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Re: Death And Etc.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 09:08:37 PM AEST (User
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"...have a gun to my head
To blow it to speaks.." umm what should that be revise ya think? Its hard to picture anything speaking after a full head shot LOL. :-)
Nice write though good right to the end.
Whisper |
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