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Array ( [sid] => 109932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moonwish [time] => 2005-11-17 14:47:00 [hometext] => I was standing on a hillside, overlooking my village in the lake district of England last winter, when I got the inspiration for this poem... [bodytext] => Standing on a snow crowned hilltop
on a magic crystal night,
jewelled stardust sprinkling down
to cloak me with celestial light.

Time is frozen with the landscape
locked in dreamlands lonely cry,
barren trees wave ghostly fingers
pointing to the winter sky.

Midnights chime is soft and distant
down the valley far away,
ice capped chapel locked and empty
heaven is another day.

I made my wish on shining star
a wish I wanted from the start,
to wander in the realms of magic
hand in hand with kindred heart.

I wandered slowly down the hill
and thought of you in reverie,
and wondered if would come the day
my wish would really come to be... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => rainbowspirit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Moonwish

Contributed by rainbowspirit on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:47:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Standing on a snow crowned hilltop
on a magic crystal night,
jewelled stardust sprinkling down
to cloak me with celestial light.

Time is frozen with the landscape
locked in dreamlands lonely cry,
barren trees wave ghostly fingers
pointing to the winter sky.

Midnights chime is soft and distant
down the valley far away,
ice capped chapel locked and empty
heaven is another day.

I made my wish on shining star
a wish I wanted from the start,
to wander in the realms of magic
hand in hand with kindred heart.

I wandered slowly down the hill
and thought of you in reverie,
and wondered if would come the day
my wish would really come to be...

Copyright © rainbowspirit ... [ 2005-11-17 14:47:00]
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Re: Moonwish (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 03:04:41 PM AEST
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I really liked the poem
Very nice use of imagery
Perfect example of wishful thinking
Good Write

~Dawn

Re: Moonwish (User Rating: 1 )
by gah_veh on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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very good write some peoples wishes come true

Re: Moonwish (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:25:38 PM AEST
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I've been there many times and I can see why it gives you such inspiration.It is like another world there.
Nice work

Steve

Re: Moonwish (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:00:30 PM AEST
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I adore the Lake district, I must admit. It really is an inspiring place.

I really like this, the images are beautiful and the poem itself has a magical feel. It's dreamy. It really draws the reader into it.

Great write,
I'll have to read more.

*hugs*
Phil xxx

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