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Array ( [sid] => 109911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wanting You.. [time] => 2005-11-17 05:45:45 [hometext] => Just a dream. [bodytext] => When I first saw you I fell in love,
you look like an Angel from heaven above,
your smile is so gorgeous,
your eye's so blue,
my heart skips a beat just looking at you.

Every morning, I hear you arrive.
jump out of bed feeling alive,
I always leave you, a little love note,
hopeing you read the words iv'e wrote..

You knock every weekend,
I give you some money,
my hands are all shaky,
my legs go all funny,
my friends say I cant,
I say I can, fall in love with the milkman.. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 7 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )
Wanting You..

Contributed by lillyjane on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 05:45:45 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



When I first saw you I fell in love,
you look like an Angel from heaven above,
your smile is so gorgeous,
your eye's so blue,
my heart skips a beat just looking at you.

Every morning, I hear you arrive.
jump out of bed feeling alive,
I always leave you, a little love note,
hopeing you read the words iv'e wrote..

You knock every weekend,
I give you some money,
my hands are all shaky,
my legs go all funny,
my friends say I cant,
I say I can, fall in love with the milkman..




Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2005-11-17 05:45:45]
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Re: Wanting You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by gah_veh on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 04:13:56 PM AEST
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p0retty good poem meaningfull and funny at the same time unique


Re: Wanting You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 06:14:32 PM AEST
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You know..it's kind of funny...but mostly ironic..


Re: Wanting You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:34:14 PM AEST
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LOL that is awesome. go milkman!


Re: Wanting You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:22:33 PM AEST
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Love this poem, it's so funny! The milkman round here is manky!


Re: Wanting You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 06:51:28 AM AEST
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really funny! well done




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