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Wanting You..
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 05:45:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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When I first saw you I fell in love,
you look like an Angel from heaven above,
your smile is so gorgeous,
your eye's so blue,
my heart skips a beat just looking at you.
Every morning, I hear you arrive.
jump out of bed feeling alive,
I always leave you, a little love note,
hopeing you read the words iv'e wrote..
You knock every weekend,
I give you some money,
my hands are all shaky,
my legs go all funny,
my friends say I cant,
I say I can, fall in love with the milkman..
Copyright ©
lillyjane
... [
2005-11-17 05:45:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wanting You..
(User Rating: 1 ) by gah_veh on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 04:13:56 PM AEST (User
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p0retty good poem meaningfull and funny at the same time unique |
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Re: Wanting You..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 06:14:32 PM AEST (User
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You know..it's kind of funny...but mostly ironic.. |
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Re: Wanting You..
(User Rating: 1 ) by assassinatorgirl on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:34:14 PM AEST (User
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LOL that is awesome. go milkman! |
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Re: Wanting You..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Manda2 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:22:33 PM AEST (User
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Love this poem, it's so funny! The milkman round here is manky! |
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Re: Wanting You..
(User Rating: 1 ) by maestar on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 06:51:28 AM AEST (User
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really funny! well done |
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